Question

17．目前，很多學(xué)生帶手機(jī)上學(xué)．為此，某英語報(bào)在你校組織了一場(chǎng)討論．討論的主題：中學(xué)生是否有必要帶手機(jī)去學(xué)校．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況．

大多數(shù)同學(xué)認(rèn)為	大多數(shù)老師認(rèn)為：	你的觀點(diǎn)：
可方便與家長、同學(xué)聯(lián)系；是一種時(shí)尚．	中學(xué)生年齡尚小，還不能自控；用手機(jī)玩游戲，發(fā)短信浪費(fèi)時(shí)間；容易引起攀比．如須打電話學(xué)校里有各種電話可供使用．	追求時(shí)尚可以理解， 但學(xué)習(xí)是首要任務(wù)．

注意：
1．信的開頭已為你寫好．
2．詞數(shù)：100左右．
3．參考詞匯：攀比：vie with…在校園內(nèi)：on the campus 手機(jī)：mobile phone
Dear editor：
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school．
                                                                   
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
I'm writing to tell you about the debate we've had whether（1）it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school（2）．我寫信告訴你關(guān)于我們舉行的中學(xué)生是否有必要帶手機(jī)去學(xué)校的辯論．
（1）whether 引導(dǎo)的同位語從句，說明debate的內(nèi)容．在書面表達(dá)中自如運(yùn)用從句是寫作能力的體現(xiàn)，同位語從句就是其中常見的高級(jí)句型．
（2）It is necessary for sb．to do sth．對(duì)某人來說做…是有必要的，其中it 是形式主語，真正的主語是動(dòng)詞不定式的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)for sb．to do sth．．
句型二：
However，most teachers think otherwise，arguing that middle school students are not old enough to control themselves．然而，大多數(shù)老師看法不同，他們認(rèn)為中學(xué)生年紀(jì)輕，不能自我控制．
（1）think otherwise=think differently想法不同．；看法不一樣．
（2）arguing是現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語，書面表達(dá)中運(yùn)用分詞做狀語總是吸引眼球的亮點(diǎn)．

解答 Dear editor：
I'm writing to tell you about the debate we've had whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school【高分句型一】（寫信的意圖）．
The majority of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and classmates if they have a mobile phone．And what's more，it's a fashion（大多數(shù)學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)）．
However，most teachers think otherwise，arguing that middle school students are not old enough to control themselves【高分句型二】．It is a waste of time for students to play games and send messages to each other by mobile phone．And it's easy to cause the students to vie with each other．If necessary they can make phone calls by using public phones on the campus（大多數(shù)老師的觀點(diǎn)）．
In my opinion，following the fashion is understandable．But as middle school students，we should put all our heart into our study（我的觀點(diǎn)）．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作時(shí)首先審題要到位：審體裁、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)；審要點(diǎn)．其次要考慮高分詞語和句型的選用，從句、非謂語動(dòng)詞、倒裝、強(qiáng)調(diào)句型等都是可考慮的高級(jí)句型；詞語和句型的選用要包含作者的感情色彩和增強(qiáng)表達(dá)的氣勢(shì)；再次，運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流暢．