Question

13．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
    2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
 Last Sunday，it was my father's funny day．After supper，my father went to see the film．But in our surprise，he came back just about half an hour later．I asked him what was the matter．He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema．He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers．Surprising，they looked at their ticket carefully，only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different．So they looked at the tickets more carefully．After a while，my father apologized the woman，saying，"Sorry，I make a mistake．Take this seat，please．"The fact was that his ticket found out in his desk drawer was for the film a month ago．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要講述了作者的父親上周日去看電影時(shí)在電影院發(fā)生的一件小趣事．

解答 Last Sunday，it was my father's funny day．After supper，my father went to see the film．But in our surprise，he came back just about half an hour later．I asked him what was the matter．He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema．He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers．Surprising，they looked at their ticket carefully，only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different．So they looked at the tickets more carefully．After a while，my father apologized∧the woman，saying，"Sorry，I make a mistake．Take this seat，please．"The fact was that his ticket found out in his desk drawer was for the film a month ago
1．the改為a 考查冠詞．"看電影"用英語表示是：see a film或go to the cinema．
2．in改為to 考查介詞．to one's surprise意為"使某人驚奇的是"，是固定搭配．
3．what改為that 考查定語從句．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語從句，先行詞 thing指物，在從句中作主語，用關(guān)系代詞that．
4．while改為when 考查連詞．此處是：be doing…when…句型，意為"正在做…這時(shí)…"，when是并列連詞，意為"這時(shí)…"．
5．her改為him 考查代詞．根據(jù)句意：一位婦女向"他"（我父親）走來．
6．Surprising改為Surprised 考查過去分詞．surprised是形容詞化的過去分詞作狀語表示原因．
7．ticket改為tickets 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．此處tickets指二人合起來的電影票，要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
8．加to 考查動詞用法．a(chǎn)pologize意為"道歉"，是不及物動詞，表示"向…道歉"時(shí)，其后加介詞to．
9．make改為made 考查動詞時(shí)態(tài)．make a mistake意為"犯錯(cuò)誤"，事情已經(jīng)發(fā)生，要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．
10．去掉 out 考查動詞用法．find out意為"查清楚，弄明白"，此處要表達(dá)的是"發(fā)現(xiàn)，看到"，用過去分詞短語found in his desk drawer作定語修飾ticket．

點(diǎn)評 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．