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18．假如你叫李華，你的美國筆友Tom給你發(fā)來一份電子郵件，表示對中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日非常感興趣．他想請你介紹你最喜歡的一個節(jié)日，如端午節(jié)、中秋節(jié)、春節(jié)，你通常是怎么慶祝的，以及你喜歡這個節(jié)日的原因．請你根據(jù)他的問題回復郵件．
提示詞語：eat，get together，share，happy，special．
注意：1．開頭語已給出
2．字數(shù)：100字左右
Hi!Tom，
I'm glad to hear that…
you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals．My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival．It usually comes in September or October．On that day，our family members usually get together and have a nice meal．（高分句型一）After that，I always admire the moon and share mooncakes with my families．
I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes．They are in the shape of a full moon．They carry people's wishes to the families they love and miss．In short，the Mid-Autumn Festival is a special day of pleasure and happiness．（高分句型二）I hope that my letter will help you know more about Chinese festivals．
Best wishes to you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你叫李華，你的美國筆友Tom給你發(fā)來一份電子郵件，表示對中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日非常感興趣．他想請你介紹你最喜歡的一個節(jié)日，如端午節(jié)、中秋節(jié)、春節(jié)，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：你通常是怎么慶祝的，以及你喜歡這個節(jié)日的原因  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be interested in對…感興趣；traditional Chinese festivals中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日；in the shape of 以…的形狀；In short總之
On that day，our family members usually get together and have a nice meal．（高分句型一）
In short，the Mid-Autumn Festival is a  special day of pleasure and happiness．（高分句型二）

解答 Hi!Tom，
       I'm glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals．My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival．It usually comes in September or October．On that day，our family members usually get together and have a nice meal．（高分句型一）After that，I always admire the moon and share mooncakes with my families．
       I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes．They are in the shape of a full moon．They carry people's wishes to the families they love and miss．In short，the Mid-Autumn Festival is a  special day of pleasure and happiness．（高分句型二）I hope that my letter will help you know more about Chinese festivals．
       Best wishes to you．
                                                                
 Yours，
                                                                     Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．