Question

南昌市即將舉辦全球財經(jīng)論壇。有關(guān)部門現(xiàn)向全社會招聘志愿者。要求：
　　(1)樂意為國際友人服務(wù);
　　(2)掌握豐富的文化知識，既能服務(wù)于外國朋友，又能傳遞中國文化;
(3)具有流利的英語表達能力，能做好溝通工作。
假如你叫李華，是江西師范大學(xué)英語專業(yè)的一名學(xué)生，請根據(jù)以上要求，用英語寫一封想做博覽會志愿者的申請。
　　要求：字跡工整，120詞左右。開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
生詞：全球財經(jīng)論壇     the Fortune Global Forum  
Dear Sir or Madam：
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter.
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　　                                    Yours,　                                                                                 　Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam:
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. with the coming of the Fortune Global Forum, I’d like very much to be a volunteer as a citizen of Nan Chang.
All our citizens are hosts for this special event. Above all , I promise I should be devoted to serving our foreign guests from all over the world. Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, so I will not only serve but also be a carrier for our wonderful culture. What’s more, English as an international language will play an important role in communication  during the forum, and I major in English and am good at it. I can express myself fluently and clearly in English.
To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer. I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。
【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運用了一些詞組：Above all 首要的是, be devoted to doing致力于，not only … but also…，不但…而且…，play an important role in在…方面起著重要的作用，major in主修，To sum up總之, 句式上的亮點：I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one. 這句話用了定語從句。
還有范文還使用了Besides, What’s more,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加順暢。