Question

19．假如你叫李平，你的美國筆友Tom來信詢問你十一假期（National Day holiday）過的怎樣．請根據(jù)表格中的信息給他回信，說明你在十一假期中的活動和理由．
注意：詞數(shù)不少于100個．

活動	理由
休息	學習緊張，缺少鍛煉和休息
看望鄉(xiāng)下的祖父母 幫助他們做點家務(wù)，并給他們談了身邊的新鮮事	陪伴他們，消除他們的孤獨
和朋友進行短途旅游	欣賞大自然，呼吸新鮮空氣

Dear Tom，
I'm very glad to receive your letter．And it's a pleasure to tell you something about                                                                                  Yours，
Li Ping．

Answer 1

分析 本文為回信．寫作要點為：1．休息．學習緊張，缺少鍛煉和休息； 2．看望鄉(xiāng)下的祖父母，幫助他們做點家務(wù)，并給他們談了身邊的新鮮事；3．和朋友進行短途旅游．欣賞大自然，呼吸新鮮空氣．注意一下幾點：（1）認真審題，確定體裁． （2）構(gòu)思要點．根據(jù)題目要求，理解要表達的要點．設(shè)計好文章的層次段落，考慮所用時態(tài)、人稱等，把要點串聯(lián)起來，構(gòu)成文章框架．（3）選詞造句，避難選易．（4）認真檢查，避免錯誤．仔細閱讀全文，查找是否有錯，注意時態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標點是否有誤，句式是否正確．邏輯是否一致．
亮點部分
And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the National Day holiday．（高分句型）
First，I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise．（高分句型）
What's more，I had a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air．（高分句型）

解答 Dear Tom，
     I'm very glad  to receive your letter．And it's a pleasure to tell you something about how I spent the National Day holiday．（高分句型）
     First，I had a good rest because recently I often felt tired as a result of my heavy study burden as well as lack of sleep and physical exercise．（高分句型）Of course，it took me two days to stay with my grandparents living in the countryside and help them do some housework and tell them what happened to me and my friends．（高分句型）What's more，I had a trip with my friends to appreciate the beauty of nature and breathe fresh air．（高分句型）What did you do in your summer holidays？I'm looking forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Ping

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．