Question

假設(shè)你是李華，昨天你發(fā)現(xiàn)你的好朋友Tom有點(diǎn)不高興，放學(xué)也沒(méi)和你一起走，你決定給他寫(xiě)封郵件，問(wèn)問(wèn)他怎么回事。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1. Tom上課時(shí)一直看表，下課也不理人，放學(xué)后很快就回家了；
2. 詢問(wèn)Tom狀況，看看有什么可以幫忙；
3. 希望能收到他的回信。
注意：1. 內(nèi)容可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；
2. 詞數(shù)100左右。
In class today, I noticed that you seemed upset.
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Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

In class today, I noticed that you seemed upset and checked the time now and then. You didn’t listen to the teacher carefully as you usually do. During the break, I tried to talk to you, but you turned your back on me and didn’t answer. I planned to have a talk with your after class, but you went home quickly. It was not like you to do that.
Is there anything wrong? We are good friends and I’ like to help you whenever you need. If you want to have a chat, I’ll be a good listener.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours
Li Hua

解析試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。同時(shí)也屬于提綱類作文，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用的時(shí)態(tài)，講昨天發(fā)生的事用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，現(xiàn)在的事用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，希望的事情用一般將來(lái)時(shí)，描述要點(diǎn)時(shí)以時(shí)間為順序，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類短文寫(xiě)作。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，本文以時(shí)間為序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。