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3．假設(shè)你是王林，得知你校擬聘用一名英語口語老師，你的美國朋友Peter已經(jīng)教書十年，而且對中國文化很感興趣．請你用英語給他發(fā)一封100詞左右的電子郵件，希望他能來應(yīng)聘．口語老師要求如下：
1．精通英語，大學(xué)畢業(yè)；2．教學(xué)經(jīng)驗豐富，性格開朗；3．喜歡學(xué)生，工作負責(zé)．
注意：1．可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2．文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
Dear Peter，
How is everything going？
I'm writing to tell you that there is an English oral teacher wanted in my school．It's required that the teacher should have a good command of English and graduate from a college．（高分句型一）In addition，he must have rich teaching experience for 5 years，and he is an open-minded person．And most importantly，the oral teacher should be responsible for his teaching，who feels happy staying with his students．（高分句型二）Since you are the native teacher of English，I think you are suitable for the job．（高分句型三）So I hope you may come to apply so that you can learn more about Chinese culture．
Yours，
Wang Lin．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息用英語給美國朋友Peter發(fā)一封100詞左右的電子郵件，希望他能來應(yīng)聘，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：精通英語，大學(xué)畢業(yè)；教學(xué)經(jīng)驗豐富，性格開朗；喜歡學(xué)生，工作負責(zé)．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：It's required that the teacher should have a good command of English and graduate from a college．（高分句型一）句中It's required that…是固定句式，其中it是形式主語，that為主語從句
And most importantly，the oral teacher should be responsible for his teaching，who feels happy staying with his students．（高分句型二）句中who引導(dǎo)的是非限制性定語從句
Since you are the native teacher of English，I think you are suitable for the job．（高分句型三）句中since引導(dǎo)的是原因狀語從句

解答 Dear Peter，
      How is everything going？
      I'm writing to tell you that there is an English oral teacher wanted in my school．It's required that the teacher should have a good command of English and graduate from a college．（高分句型一）In addition，he must have rich teaching experience for 5 years，and he is an open-minded person．And most importantly，the oral teacher should be responsible for his teaching，who feels happy staying with his students．（高分句型二）Since you are the native teacher of English，I think you are suitable for the job．（高分句型三）So I hope you may come to apply so that you can learn more about Chinese culture．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Wang Lin

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．