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4．今年九月，北大考試研究院院長秦春華發(fā)文稱，四大名著不適合孩子閱讀．可能不少人不太認同他的觀點，但只限于私下議論．鄭州外國語學校高三學生高澤林卻站出來公開叫板秦春華，他認為四大名著孩子可以讀，相較于四大名著中的負面內容，現(xiàn)實中的低俗更甚．他的文章條理清晰，有理有據(jù)，引來不少網(wǎng)友點贊．
高中生挑戰(zhàn)北大教授，你真覺得好嗎？請以李華的名義給高澤林同學寫一封信表達自己的看法．（提示詞：四大名著：four great classical novels）
要點：1．寫信目的；
2．與他交流你對四大名著的看法；
3．希望收到回信．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Zelin Gao，
I am a high school student of the same age with you．Recently，your debate about four great classical novels with the professor of Peking University has become a hot topic on the Internet．（高分句型一）I am writing to share some ideas with you．
In my opinion，four great classical novels are the precious culture treasure of our nation as well as the greatest and most influential works among the literary circle of China．（高分句型二）As a result，we can learn the meaning of love，loyalty and wisdom．However，only when we establish the correct sense in these aspects can we resist the wrong social trend in the future．（高分句型三）I have learnt a lot from your article and hope to have a further discussion with you about reading and other aspects．
Looking forward to hearing from you soon．
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息針對今年九月，北大考試研究院院長秦春華發(fā)文稱，四大名著不適合孩子閱讀．可能不少人不太認同他的觀點，但只限于私下議論．鄭州外國語學校高三學生高澤林卻站出來公開叫板秦春華，他認為四大名著孩子可以讀，相較于四大名著中的負面內容，現(xiàn)實中的低俗更甚．他的文章條理清晰，有理有據(jù)，引來不少網(wǎng)友點贊，以李華的名義給高澤林同學寫一封信表達自己的看法：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：寫信目的；與他交流你對四大名著的看法；希望收到回信． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文內容齊全，結構嚴謹，層次分明，布局合理，語言精練，同時運用高級句子．倒裝句的使用非常漂亮：only when we establish the correct sense in these aspects can we resist the wrong social trend in the future．連接詞的使用也是一大亮點：In my opinion，As a result，However．

解答 Dear Zelin Gao，
      I am a high school student of the same age with you．Recently，your debate about four great classical novels with the professor of Peking University has become a hot topic on the Internet．（高分句型一）I am writing to share some ideas with you．
      In my opinion，four great classical novels are the precious culture treasure of our nation as well as the greatest and most influential works among the literary circle of China．（高分句型二）As a result，we can learn the meaning of love，loyalty and wisdom．However，only when we establish the correct sense in these aspects can we resist the wrong social trend in the future．（高分句型三）I have learnt a lot from your article and hope to have a further discussion with you about reading and other aspects．
       Looking forward to hearing from you soon．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours truly，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．