Question

最近，隨著天氣越來越冷，對于學(xué)校早起跑操的規(guī)定，不少學(xué)生不愿意積極參加。其實(shí)，早起對成長中的學(xué)生是有很多好處的。請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇關(guān)于早起有益的短文。

1. 早起鍛煉可使身體強(qiáng)壯；

2. 早起朗讀，有助于記住學(xué)過的東西；

3. 可為一天的學(xué)習(xí)生活做好準(zhǔn)備；

4. 堅(jiān)持早起對培養(yǎng)好的性格也有益處。

參考詞匯：性格 (character)

詞數(shù)：100左右。 開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Getting up early is a good habit.

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Answer 1

Getting up early is a good habit. It is of great importance to our health, our study and our life.First, it can help us to keep fit and strong. We can improve our health by doing morning exercises, walking, running in the open air. Second, getting up early and reading aloud can help memorize what we have learned easily.Third, if we get up early, we don’t need to be in a hurry to go to school or work without having breakfast.So we’ll have a very good mood all day.If we stick to it, it will benefit us a lot, especially in our character-making.

【解析】這是一篇給定觀點(diǎn)型的短文寫作。主要為早起是個(gè)好習(xí)慣提供支持的觀點(diǎn)，在羅列分析時(shí)應(yīng)注意觀點(diǎn)之間的鏈接，做到清晰有序，文章最后應(yīng)有適當(dāng)總結(jié)，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)分明。第二句It is of great importance to our health, our study and our life開篇點(diǎn)明觀點(diǎn)，早起對健康、學(xué)習(xí)、生活很重要，be of great importance to對……至關(guān)重要；第三句直接闡述支持觀點(diǎn)的理由First, it can help us to keep fit and strong，對應(yīng)早起對健康的重要；第五句點(diǎn)出早起對學(xué)習(xí)的好處Second, getting up early and reading aloud can help memorize what we have learned easily中what引導(dǎo)賓語從句；第六句Third, if we get up early, we don’t need to be in a hurry to go to school or work without having breakfast，if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句表述第三個(gè)理由，早起對生活的好處，be in hurry to do sth和without doing sth的巧用使得句子富有變化；第八句If we stick to it, it will benefit us a lot, especially in our character-making提出建議，結(jié)束全文。總結(jié)：闡述觀點(diǎn)時(shí)應(yīng)注意先后順序，其次應(yīng)靈活運(yùn)用詞語形式的變換使得句子不僅通順流暢，也不會太過平淡無味

考點(diǎn)：考查給定觀點(diǎn)型寫作