Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面這幅漫畫(huà)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的短文。

要求：

1. 請(qǐng)闡述溫室效應(yīng)所產(chǎn)生的原因。

2. 簡(jiǎn)述其后果，應(yīng)盡可能涵蓋圖中所有信息（至少談及三個(gè)方面）。

3. 我們?cè)撛趺崔k？

These years, global warming is becoming a serious problem, endangering people’s life.      

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

                                                                               

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

These years, global warming is becoming a serious problem, endangering people’s life.

Several factors contribute to the rise of temperature. First of all, a lot of greenhouse gas is produced by cars and factories; further more, people burn a lot of coal and wood for their life; the loss of forests is another cause of global warming.

Global warming will cause some harmful effects. In the first place, some islands will disappear because of the rise of sea level, and thus people of certain countries will have to look for new places to live. Extreme weather, will also result from global warming. When temperature rises, the production of crops will decrease, which directly endangers people’s lives. If the temperature keeps rising, some animals and plants will disappear from the planet, thus destroying the ecosystem.

Facing such a threat, we should join efforts to ‘cool’ the earth. For example, we can take a subway or bus to work instead of driving private cars to reduce greenhouse gas. All in all, we are supposed to remember it’s our responsibility to save our earth.  （168 words）

【解析】

試題分析：寫(xiě)漫畫(huà)作文首先要仔細(xì)觀察畫(huà)面內(nèi)容，要觀察圖畫(huà)的全貌，要觀察背景與人物，要觀察圖畫(huà)的細(xì)節(jié)，還要分清主次。第二，要深入體會(huì)圖畫(huà)作者的創(chuàng)作意圖，要知道作者在提倡什么，反對(duì)什么，頌揚(yáng)什么諷刺什么，這樣在寫(xiě)作時(shí)才能把握的準(zhǔn)確。第三，要根據(jù)觀察、體會(huì)發(fā)揮自己的想象與聯(lián)想，把作文寫(xiě)充實(shí)、寫(xiě)生動(dòng)。第四，要明確作文寫(xiě)作的目的要求，做到作文與要求相符。

考點(diǎn)：這是一篇議論文。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：考生要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)�？忌�注意使用過(guò)渡詞或者過(guò)渡句來(lái)使文章讀起來(lái)比較流暢。動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作練習(xí)以外，還可以適當(dāng)背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。