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13．科學技術的發(fā)展給我們的日常生活帶來了很大的變化．請你以"Science and technology is changing our life greatly"為話題，談談你家三代人購物生活的變化，并暢想未來的購物方式．
注意：詞數(shù)120左右．開頭已給出．
With the development of science and technology，our way of life has been changing all the time．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于開放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息科學技術的發(fā)展給我們的日常生活帶來了很大的變化．請你以"Science and technology is changing our life greatly"為話題，談談你家三代人購物生活的變化，并暢想未來的購物方式，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，2、開放式作文要善于利用自己的想象，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：With the development of science and technology隨著科學和技術的發(fā)展；in many ways在很多方面；in the future在未來；prefer to do喜歡做某事；as well as 也，和；
Many things that we thought would never happen before are now a reality．（高分句型一）
Later，supermarkets opened in our town，so my mother went shopping in a supermarket near my home because it was very convenient．（高分句型二）
Many young people like me prefer to buy what we like sitting in front of the computer because it can save us time and labour．（高分句型三）
New technology will benefit us a lot and we will enjoy the advantages it brings to us．（高分句型四）

解答 With the development of science and technology，our way of life has been changing all the time．Many things that we thought would never happen before are now a reality．（高分句型一）For example，the way of shopping has changed in many ways．My grandmother told me she usually covered a long distance to a small shop in town to buy her goods．Later，supermarkets opened in our town，so my mother went shopping in a supermarket near my home because it was very convenient．（高分句型二）
      In recent years，online shopping has become popular．Many young people like me prefer to buy what we like sitting in front of the computer because it can save us time and labour．（高分句型三）
      I think，in the future，we may depend on our robot servants to do the shopping as well as the housework．New technology will benefit us a lot and we will enjoy the advantages it brings to us．（高分句型四）

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