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2．你叫Jenny，你的網(wǎng)友Peter（高一學(xué)生）即將面臨期末考試，近日，他就是否要請(qǐng)家教來(lái)幫他復(fù)習(xí)迎考向你求教，請(qǐng)給Peter回復(fù)一封電子郵件，郵件必須包括以下內(nèi)容：
結(jié)合你自身的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷就是否請(qǐng)家教表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)及理由；
就復(fù)習(xí)迎考給出2條主要建議．
Hearing that you're wondering whether you should invite a tutor to help you prepare for the coming final examination，I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'．
A tutor costs high，usually 150 yuan or more per hour，which you may not be able to afford．Besides，having studied that detailed information of tutor classes from my classmates，I find that most of the information is similar to that of school's，which is even with little or no extended materials，so it's absolutely no use if you listen to the teachers with full attention in the school and review what is on your notebook carefully after class．What's more，a tutor may make you depend fully onhim and lose your self-motivation on study，which is exactly the truth of study．Without it，you may never learn better．And that's why I say there's no need for you to invite a home tutor．
When it comes to preparing for the exam，I'd like to give you two suggestions．First，review the points which you're poor at．You will achieve twice the result with half the effort if reviewing the notes accompanied with several particular exercises．Second，check all the notes and make sure that you've captured all the details．
Try hard and I believe you can achieve a good score in the exam．．

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分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一封電子郵件，就即將面臨期末考試的高一學(xué)生Peter是否要請(qǐng)家教來(lái)幫他來(lái)復(fù)習(xí)迎考表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)并提供建議．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．結(jié)合自身學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)及理由； 2．就復(fù)習(xí)迎考提出主要建議．寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．重要短語(yǔ)：invitesb to do （邀請(qǐng)某人做某事），prepare for （為…作準(zhǔn)備），be able to do（能夠做某事），be similar to （與…相似），dependon  （取決于，依賴），be of no use （沒有用處），When it comes to…（當(dāng)談到，涉及到），bepoor at （在…薄弱），be accompanied with（帶有，兼有），captureall the details（掌握所有細(xì)節(jié)），achievea good score（取得好成績(jī)）．

【高分句型】
1．Hearing that you're wondering whether you should invite a tutor to help you prepare for the coming final examination，I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'．
這里是由現(xiàn)在分詞hearing作狀語(yǔ)，主句為I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'，主句的主語(yǔ)為I與所給動(dòng)詞hear存在邏輯上的主動(dòng)關(guān)系．

2．A tutor costs high，usually 150 yuan or more per hour，which you may not be able to afford．
這里是由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which在從句中作賓語(yǔ)，指代前面的名詞150 yuan or more per hour．

3．I find that most of the information is similar to ②that of school's，①which is even with little or no extended materials，③so it's absolutely no use if you listen to the teachers with full attention in the school and review what is on your notebook carefully after class．
①這里是由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which在從句中作主語(yǔ)，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．
②這里是代詞that可指代前面的名詞the information，that=the+名詞．
③這里是由連詞so引導(dǎo)的句子，與前面的句子I find that most of the information is similar to that of school's，which is even with little or no extended materials構(gòu)成因果關(guān)系．

解答 Hearing thatyou're wondering whether you should invite a tutor to help you prepare for thecoming final examination，I'm shocked and I'll give you an exact'No'．【高分句型】（表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)）
A tutor costshigh，usually 150 yuan or more per hour，which you may not be able to afford．【高分句型】Besides，having studied that detailed informationof tutor classes from my classmates，I find that most of the information issimilar to that of school's，which is even with little or no extendedmaterials，so it's absolutely no use if you listen to the teachers with fullattention in the school and review what is on your notebook carefully afterclass．【高分句型】What's more，a tutor may make you dependfully on him and lose your self-motivation on study，which isexactly the truth of study．【高分句型】Withoutit，you may never learn better．And that's why I say there's no need for you toinvite a home tutor．（理由）
  When itcomes to preparing for the exam，I'd like to give you two suggestions．First，review the points which you're poor at．You will achieve twice the result withhalf the effort if reviewing the notes accompanied with several particularexercises．Second，check all the notes and make sure that you've captured all thedetails．【高分句型】（建議）
    Try hard and I believe you can achieve agood score in the exam．（結(jié)尾---總結(jié)概括）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．