Question

任何一個(gè)國(guó)家都有社會(huì)公德來(lái)營(yíng)造社會(huì)環(huán)境和促進(jìn)社會(huì)進(jìn)步。近年來(lái)，有的人道德滑坡，遵守社會(huì)公德在一些人眼里變得不值得重視，甚至認(rèn)為講公德會(huì)吃虧，自私自利的行為時(shí)有發(fā)生。請(qǐng)根據(jù)某天發(fā)生在校園中的一個(gè)情景，先對(duì)漫畫(huà)“垃圾筒旁邊的垃圾”的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)要描述，然后對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象簡(jiǎn)要發(fā)表自己的看法并提出一條倡議。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)。
要求：
1. 適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)言連貫。
2. 詞數(shù)100詞左右。
參考詞匯：社會(huì)公德 social morality

Answer 1

One day a boy was eating a banana in the campus. After eating it up, he wanted to throw the skin into the dustbin, but it dropped outside. Although the dustbin was near/The dustbin being near, he didn’t want to take any trouble to pick it up but went away directly, thinking that someone would clean the rubbish. The banana skin smelt bad after a while.
Obviously, what the boy did shows a lack of social morality. Nowadays some people consider it of little value to observe social morality and become more selfish and indifferent. We need to take action to develop a sound system which advocates good behaviours and keep all necessary disciplines and requirements in mind, thus creating a harmonious social environment benefiting others as well as ourselves. Personally, the most effective way is that we should raise people’s awareness and act morally individually.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，看圖作文要求考生將畫(huà)面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫(huà)用文字表達(dá)出來(lái)，除了能表達(dá)清楚圖畫(huà)中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)。如果是記敘文類的寫(xiě)作素材，考生要注意故事的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、過(guò)程、結(jié)果這六個(gè)要素；如果是說(shuō)明文或議論文，考生則首先要對(duì)圖畫(huà)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后圍繞圖畫(huà)的信息進(jìn)行說(shuō)明或議論。此時(shí)考生一定要注意把握?qǐng)D畫(huà)的中心思想，寫(xiě)出圖畫(huà)要反映的內(nèi)容。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開(kāi)頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】After eating it up, he wanted to throw the skin into the dustbin, but it dropped outside. 這句話用了動(dòng)名詞，Although the dustbin was near/The dustbin being near, he didn’t want to take any trouble to pick it up but went away directly, thinking that someone would clean the rubbish. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)， Obviously, what the boy did shows a lack of social morality. 這句話用了主語(yǔ)從句，Nowadays some people consider it of little value to observe social morality and become more selfish and indifferent. 這句話用了it做形式賓語(yǔ)，We need to take action to develop a sound system which advocates good behaviours and keep all necessary disciplines and requirements in mind, thus creating a harmonious social environment benefiting others as well as ourselves. 這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)和定語(yǔ)，Personally, the most effective way is that we should raise people’s awareness and act morally individually.這句話用了表語(yǔ)從句。