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13．假設(shè)你是李津，在十一旅游期間入住北京友誼賓館702房間，10月2日入住，10月6日退房．你回家后發(fā)現(xiàn)一個中等大小的藍色皮背包遺失在哪里，內(nèi)有幾本學(xué)習(xí)參考書，一個白色ipad，一張信用卡和少量現(xiàn)金．請用英文給該賓館外籍經(jīng)理寫一封email，請他幫忙尋找并寄回．
信件要點包括：
1．陳述寫信原因；
2．簡要描述該背包；
3．說明其重要性；
4．期待回復(fù)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：不少于100；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；
3．開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Sir，
I'm so grateful for your good service during my stay in Beijing for a tour，but I'm writing to ask a favour to find and send back my pack which I left in your hotel．（高分句型一）
I checked in on Oct.2 and out on Oct.6．Setting off in a rush for the station，I left the pack in Room 702．It's a medium-sized，blue，leather backpack which contains some reference books，a white ipad，a credit card and some cash．All in the pack matters to me，especially the ipad，a precious gift from my father on my 18^thbirthday．So much did I cherish it that I feel upset for its loss．（高分句型二）
If you find it，would you please post it to me？The return address is at the end of the letter．
I'll appreciate it very much if you can give me your earliest reply．（高分句型三）
Yours sincerely，
Li Jin
Yours sincerely，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來．本文的要點要考生自己稍加補充．具體可在重要性方面加強說明，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：1．be grateful for"因…而感激"；2．a(chǎn)sk a favor to do sth．"請求幫忙做某事"；3．check in"登機；登記入住"；4．check out"結(jié)賬離開，退房"；5．in a rush"匆匆忙忙地"；6．matter to"對…重要"
 I'm so grateful for your good service during my stay in Beijing for a tour，but I'm writing to ask a favour to find and send back my pack which I left in your hotel．（高分句型一）
So much did I cherish it that I feel upset for its loss．（高分句型二）
 I'll appreciate it very much if you can give me your earliest reply．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir，
    I'm so grateful for your good service during my stay in Beijing for a tour，but I'm writing to ask a favour to find and send back my pack which I left in your hotel．（高分句型一）
    I checked in on Oct.2 and out on Oct.6．Setting off in a rush for the station，I left the pack in Room 702．It's a medium-sized，blue，leather backpack which contains some reference books，a white ipad，a credit card and some cash．All in the pack matters to me，especially the ipad，a precious gift from my father on my 18^th birthday．So much did I cherish it that I feel upset for its loss．（高分句型二）
    If you find it，would you please post it to me？The return address is at the end of the letter．
    I'll appreciate it very much if you can give me your earliest reply．（高分句型三）
                                                                                                                                                         Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                            Li Jin

點評 本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．