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11．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華，校報(bào)英文版正在開展"續(xù)寫雷鋒日記"活動．請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，將你所做的一件好事以日記形式記述下來，向校報(bào)投稿．
注意：1．日記的開頭已為你寫好．
2．詞數(shù)不少于60．

Saturday，May 3                                                    Fine
This morning，．

Answer 1

分析 本題考察的是看圖作文．要求以李華的口吻并用日記的形式來描述圖片內(nèi)容．所以使用一般過去時和第一人稱．要點(diǎn)：1．李華早晨起來在公園里跑步，發(fā)現(xiàn)了長凳上有一個錢包．2．打開錢包，發(fā)現(xiàn)里面有一些錢和名片．3．李華聯(lián)系錢包的主人；4．對方過來取錢包，并表揚(yáng)李華的好行為．
看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)謀篇布局．要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達(dá)出來，除了能表達(dá)清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當(dāng)拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調(diào)．如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，考生要注意故事的時間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件的起因、過程、結(jié)果這六個要素；如果是說明文或議論文，考生則首先要對圖畫的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進(jìn)行說明或議論．此時考生一定要注意把握圖畫的中心思想，寫出圖畫要反映的內(nèi)容．
【一句多譯】
1．錢包里面是一些錢和一張印有電話號碼的卡片．
①Inside it，I found somemoney and a card with a phone number．
②Inside it were somemoney and a card with a phone number．
2．聽說我撿到了他的錢包，你送了一口氣并告訴我他馬上就過來．
①Hearing that I hadhis wallet，he sighed with relief and told me he would return right away．
②On hearing that Ihad his wallet，he sighed with relief and told me he would return right away．

解答 Saturday，May 3                                                          Fine
This morning，I was jogging in the park when I caught sight of a wallet on a bench．Clearly，someone had left it there by accident．I picked it up and checked the contents．Inside it，I found some money and a card with a phone number．Believing thatthe owner would be worried，I immediately tried the number．A man answered itin an anxious voice．Hearing that I had his wallet，he sighed with relief andtold me he would return right away．Ten minutes later，the man arrived．Afterconfirming he was the owner，I handed the wallet back to him．With his thumbup，he expressed his gratitude to me repeatedly．Seeing the smile on his face，I felt happy that I was able to help．

點(diǎn)評 考生需根據(jù)所提供的信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點(diǎn)及寫作意圖，仔細(xì)構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．