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【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

During the holiday I take part in a special summer camp. There I met a girl from Canvey, a town on the Thames, where is to the east of London. As a host, I showed him around such place as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. She was deeply impressing by the great sights. I also told her about the great changes that had been taken place in the past few decades. She said Beijing was quite different from that she had expected and that it was very beautifully. Meanwhile, I improved my spoken English in her help. I think summer camp is very valuable.

Answer 1

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【解析】考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。文章使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)描述，故將take改為took。

考查定語(yǔ)從句。先行詞為Thames，關(guān)系詞在從句中充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)，故將where改為which。

考查代詞。上文中提到girl，故將代詞him改為her。

考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。句中提到兩個(gè)名勝古跡：長(zhǎng)城，故宮。故將place改為places。

考查固定短語(yǔ)。句意：壯麗的景色給她留下了深刻的印象。sb. be impressed給某人留下印象。故將impressing改為impressed。

考查固定用法。take place發(fā)生，沒(méi)有被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。故將been去掉。

考查賓語(yǔ)從句。What在從句中充當(dāng)excepted的賓語(yǔ)，故將that改為what。

考查形容詞。形容詞作表語(yǔ)，故將beautifully改為beautiful。

考查介詞。在誰(shuí)的幫助下by/with the help of sb.或by/with one’s help故將in改為with/by。

考查定冠詞。上文中提及并特指應(yīng)使用定冠詞the。