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7．《21世紀英文報》中學生版舉行以"An Unforgettable Experience in My High School Life"為題的征文活動，請你用英語寫篇100-120個字的文章，記述一件令你難忘的事．要求如下：
1．記述事情經過．
2．簡要說明你感到難忘的原因或從中得到的啟示．
注意：文章的標題已給出（不計詞數）
An Unforgettable Experience in My High School LifeHow times goes by!It won't be long before I say goodbye to my high school life．Looking back on what has happened during the past three years，there is one thing that is most unforgettable to me．（高分句型一）It was my turn to give an English speech in class．I felt worried because I was ashamed of my broken English．So I went to Mr．Li，my English teacher，for help．He not only encouraged me，but also offered some valuable advice．I spent nearly two hours practicing it at home until I was satisfied．To my joy，my performance turned out to be such a great success that my teacher and all my classmates applauded when I finished it．（高分句型二）It is the teacher's encouragement that helps me gain courage and build up my confidence．（高分句型三）Through the experience，I know that whenever we have difficulties we should never be afraid to ask others for help．Sometimes the advice from others matters a lot．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據提示信息《21世紀英文報》中學生版舉行以"An Unforgettable Experience in My High School Life"為題的征文活動，請你用英語寫篇100-120個字的文章，記述一件令你難忘的事，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：記述事情經過．簡要說明你感到難忘的原因或從中得到的啟示．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：say goodbye to 說再見；Look back on 回顧；be ashamed of 對…感到羞愧；To my joy令我高興的是；build up建立；
Looking back on what has happened during the past three years，there is one thing that is most unforgettable to me．（高分句型一）
To my joy，my performance turned out to be such a great success that my teacher and all my classmates applauded when I finished it．（高分句型二）
It is the teacher's encouragement that helps me gain courage and build up my confidence．（高分句型三）

解答 My Most Unforgettable Experience in High School
      How times goes by!It won't be long before I say goodbye to my high school life．Looking back on what has happened during the past three years，there is one thing that is most unforgettable to me．（高分句型一）It was my turn to give an English speech in class．I felt worried because I was ashamed of my broken English．So I went to Mr．Li，my English teacher，for help．He not only encouraged me，but also offered some valuable advice．I spent nearly two hours practicing it at home until I was satisfied．To my joy，my performance turned out to be such a great success that my teacher and all my classmates applauded when I finished it．（高分句型二）It is the teacher's encouragement that helps me gain courage and build up my confidence．（高分句型三）Through the experience，I know that whenever we have difficulties we should never be afraid to ask others for help．Sometimes the advice from others matters a lot．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．