Question

1．你是李華，因作為交換學(xué)生將前往英國學(xué)習(xí)生活一年，現(xiàn)在學(xué)校校園網(wǎng)上征求一位同學(xué)暫時承擔(dān)你學(xué)校板報設(shè)計的工作．文中必須包括：
1．你寫此征求文的目的．
2．你對應(yīng)征同學(xué)的要求．
3．承擔(dān)此項工作的注意事項．
（文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名，學(xué)校等任何真實信息）

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一篇短文，對前來應(yīng)征暫時承擔(dān)學(xué)校板報設(shè)計工作的同學(xué)的工作提出建議和要求．寫作要點包括：1．寫此征求文的目的； 2．你對應(yīng)征同學(xué)的要求；3，承擔(dān)此項工作的注意事項．
寫作時人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
重要短語：take care of （照料，照顧），board newspaper design （板報設(shè)計），be requested to do （被要求做某事），be responsible （對…負責(zé)），complete the mission （完成任務(wù)），in the limited time （在有限的時間里），pay attention to （注意），the distribution of…（…的分配）．
【高分句型】
1．He/She has to know enough skills about Word，Photoshop and content selection in order that it's easier to create board newspaper．
這里是in order that 引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句，意為"以致"
2．I hope you can create a board newspaper that everyone loves．
這里是由that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，先行詞為a board newspaper，從句中主語為everyone，謂語動詞為loves，從句中缺少賓語，由關(guān)系代詞that引導(dǎo)．

解答 Dear schoolmates，
Thank you for reading this letter!
My name is Li Hua．Because I am an exchange student，I have to go England tostudy for 1 year．But now I need a student to help me take care of boardnewspaper design．（寫此征求文的目的）
The candidate is requestedfirstly to be creative．He/She also has to design a novel board newspaper．Secondly，he/she must be responsible and can complete the mission in thelimited time in school．Thirdly，he/she has to know enough skills about Word，Photoshop and content selection in order that it's easier to create boardnewspaper．【高分句型】（你對應(yīng)征同學(xué)的要求）
And lastly the candidate hasto pay attention to the distribution of their own learning time．Don't forgetyour study．I hope you can create a board newspaper that everyone loves．【高分句型】（承擔(dān)此項工作的注意事項）
 Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．