Question

10．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Good morning，ladies and gentlemen．May I have your attention，please？
I have something important to tell you．Our plan to visit the countryside has to put off till tomorrow because the rain．Now I will introduce their plan for today．we would go to visit a middle school by bus on this morning．A school has a history of 85 years．Then we'll go to an exhibition of some new invention．I think it will be interested．The bus will wait at the gate of the hotel．We'll set out at 8：30．Taking everything necessary with you and please get on the bus on time．You are welcome to ask me unless you still have any questions．Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 女士們先生們，我有一些重要的事情告訴你，今天去鄉(xiāng)下參觀的事情由于下雨將被推遲到明天，今天我們將乘坐公共汽車去參觀一所學校，然后去看一個新發(fā)明展．早晨8點半出發(fā)，請帶好東西按時乘車．歡迎有問題隨時向我咨詢．

解答 Good morning，ladies and gentlemen．May I have your attention，please？
I have something important to tell you．Our plan to visit the countryside has to∧put off till tomorrow because∧the rain．Now I will introduce their plan for today．we would go to visit a middle school by bus on this morning．A school has a history of 85 years．Then we'll go to an exhibition of some new invention．I think it will be interested．The bus will wait at the gate of the hotel．We'll set out at 8：30．Taking everything necessary with you and please get on the bus on time．You are welcome to ask me unless you still have any questions．Thank you for listening．
詳解：
1．put前面加be；考查被動語態(tài)，Our plan與動詞短語put off 應該是被動關系，故加上be構成被動語態(tài)．
2．because后面加of；考查介詞，because引導原因狀語從句，后面是名詞the rain，所以要加上介詞of．
3．their改為our；考查形容詞性物主代詞，分析句意應為"現(xiàn)在我介紹一下我們今天的計劃"，所以要把their改為our．
4．去掉on；考查習慣用法，在英語中，如果day，month，year，morning等表示時間的名詞前面有l(wèi)ast，next，this，that，some，every等詞修飾時，前面不加任何介詞，故把on去掉．
5．A改為The；考查冠詞，結合語境這里要用定冠詞the表示特指，特指上文提到的那個學校．
6．invention改為inventions；考查名詞的復數(shù)，invention是可數(shù)名詞，前面有some修飾，故用復數(shù)形式．
8．interested改為interesting；考查分詞作形容詞，現(xiàn)在分詞作形容詞修飾物，過去分詞作形容詞修飾人，所有這里要用interesting修飾it．
9．out改為off；考查固定短語，set off是固定搭配，意為"出發(fā)，動身"．
10．unless改為if；考查條件狀語從句，分析句意應為"如果你有問題…"，所以這里用if引導一個條件狀語從句，unless意為"除非"．

點評 短文改錯考查涉及面廣，涉及動詞考查的有時態(tài)、語態(tài)、非謂語動詞形式、詞匯等，另外還涉及到句型結構、行文邏輯、固定搭配等，這就要求考生要在平時注意詞匯以及句型和語法結構的掌握．