Question

假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，給你校校長(zhǎng)寫一封120詞左右的建議信。

現(xiàn)狀	吃飯時(shí)人太多，要排很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間的隊(duì)；還有不少同學(xué)占位，這使很多同學(xué)沒(méi)有吃飯的座位；
措施	禁止占位； 各年級(jí)輪流吃飯，如：可以讓高年級(jí)的同學(xué)晚十分鐘去吃飯； 有條件的話，再建一個(gè)食堂；

可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫、通順。

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Dear Headmaster,

I’m writing to make some suggestions for improving the dining conditions of our school.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Headmaster,

I’m writing to make some suggestions for improving the dining conditions of our school. Because too many students have lunch in the dining room and therefore it takes quite a long time to queue. Worse still, some even occupy seats for their friends or classmates, which makes quite a few students unable to find tables to sit at.

Immediate measures must be taken to solve the problem. First, it must be forbidden to occupy seats. Second, students in different grades can take turns to have lunch. For example, those in higher grades can have lunch 10 minutes late. Anyway, the best way is to build a new dining room, if possible.

There are my suggestions and I hope they could mean something for better future of our dining conditions.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】略