Question

11．假設(shè)你是李華，得知肖偉在跟他的父母相處的過(guò)程中遇到一些困惑．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列信息寫(xiě)信給他，并提供一些建議．

Xiao Wei's problems with his parents	not get along well with parents； forbid him from playing computer games； have no time to be alone …
Li Hua's advice	…

要求：1．必須包括所有信息；至少寫(xiě)3條建議；
      2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．詞數(shù)：100詞左右．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)．
Dear Xiao Wei，
                                                                             
Best regards．
Yours truly．

Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文中常見(jiàn)的書(shū)信．話題是父母相處的過(guò)程中遇到一些困惑，有很強(qiáng)的可寫(xiě)性，文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，但只是一個(gè)提綱，考生還需要做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮．在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次．同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second，Besides，What's more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢．本篇文章在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：have difficulty getting along well with，feel very angry about，have a good talk with，In this way，work hard at give up．句型：you can explain how you feel． 這句話有賓語(yǔ)從句，You should listen to them as they love you most．這句話有原因狀語(yǔ)從句，It is true that you need time to be alone． 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)，However，you should make an effort to do what your parents ask． 這句話也是賓語(yǔ)從句，Both being a teenager and being a parent can be very difficult． 這句話用了動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)，Communicate with them more and you can find many problems can be solved． 這句話用了固定句型：祈使句+and/or+簡(jiǎn)單句．

解答 Dear Xiao Wei，
     I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty getting along well with your parents．（高分句型一）Don't worry．It is a common problem．You say that your parents do not listen to you．You feel very angry about this．I think you'd better have a good talk with them．In this way you can explain how you feel．You should listen to them as they love you most．（高分句型二） It is true that you need time to be alone．However you should make an effort to do what your parents ask．（高分句型三）And of course you must work hard at your study．Your study is important to your future．Both being a teenager and being a parent can be very difficult．However don't give up．Communicate with them more and you can find many problems can be solved．
     Best regards．
                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours truly
                                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．