Question

18．教育部、國家體育總局、共青團中央發(fā)出通知，要求從10月26日至明年4月30日，開展第二屆全國億萬學(xué)生陽光體育冬季長跑活動．目的在于營造一個生機勃勃，充滿激情，健康向上的和諧校園，但同學(xué)們對于參加此項活動有不同的看法．請根據(jù)表格中所提供的內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇短文．要點如下：

贊同	不贊同	你的觀點…
增強體質(zhì)，磨練意志，放松自我等…	天氣冷，操揚擁擠，單調(diào)，學(xué)業(yè)緊，邊聽音樂，邊做作業(yè)來放松…

注意：1． 可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫；2． 詞數(shù)120左右，首句已給出，不計入詞數(shù)．
There are different opinions on taking part in the Sunshine Winter Sport Long-distance Running even among us students．      ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Many students take an active part in the event because they think it can help to cultivate physical and mental health and to get strong-willed．
高分句型二：
As far as I'm concerned，we should participate in the event
句型一 ①Many students take an active part in the event  該句謂語部分使用了一個重要的短語：take an active part in 積極參與…②because they think it can help to cultivate physical and mental health and to get strong-willed該句是一個由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句
句型二 As far as I'm concerned，固定短語：as far as sb be concerned 在某人看來．participate in 參加

解答 There are different opinions on taking part in the Sunshine Winter Sport Long-distance Running event among us students．（提出論點）
   Many students take an active part in the event because they think it can help to cultivate physical and mental health and to get strong-willed．（高分句型一）Besides，they can get relaxd from it after long hours of hard study．
   However，part of students take little interest in it．They believe the event is too dull．What's more，it's cold and it's too crowed on the playground．In their opinions，they can relax themselves by listening to music while doing their homework．
   As far as I'm concerned，we should participate in the event．（高分句型二）We can learn a great deal in it．Furthermore，the modern society requires of young students many qualities，so"book-worms"can't keep up with the times any longer．（提出建議）

點評 該書面表達為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．