Question

【題目】假定你是李華，大學剛畢業(yè)。你看見某公司在China Daily上刊登了一則廣告，招聘英文秘書一名，要求如下。請你根據(jù)其要求，寫一封求職信。

1. 20~25周歲，身體健康，身高1.75米以上；

2.本科以上學歷，有工作經(jīng)驗者優(yōu)先；

3.具備扎實的英語基礎(chǔ)，擅長寫作。

注意: 1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear sir,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear sir,

Having learned in China Daily that you are looking for a secretary who has a good command of the English language, I’m writing to apply for this position.

My name is Li hua, twenty-two years old. I am 1.78 meters tall, strong and healthy. I’ve just graduated from the English Department of Yunnan University with a bachelor’s degree. In my spare time at university, I worked as a typist for some time. I’m also good at writing in English and two articles of mine have been published in 21st Century so far. And I passed the National English Band 6 last year.

I’m very interested in the job. If I can take the position, I’ll be thankful to you for your kindness.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封求職信，應聘英文秘書。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：

1. 20~25周歲，身體健康，身高1.75米以上；

2.本科以上學歷，有工作經(jīng)驗者優(yōu)先；

3.具備扎實的英語基礎(chǔ)，擅長寫作。

第二步：列提綱 (重點詞組)

look for；look forward to；a good command of；graduate from；be good at

第三步：連詞成句

Having learned in China Daily that you are looking for a secretary who has a good command of the English language, I’m writing to apply for this position.

I’ve just graduated from the English Department of Yunnan University with a bachelor’s degree.

I’m also good at writing in English and two articles of mine have been published in 21st Century so far.

I’m very interested in the job. If I can take the position, I’ll be thankful to you for your kindness.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second，And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改