一則“一位9歲男童因扶起摔倒的老太太而遭訛詐”的網(wǎng)帖引起熱議，老太太堅(jiān)持說小男孩吧她撞到了，向其索要治療費(fèi)用，幸虧當(dāng)時(shí)有路過的群眾作證，要不道德何在？這件事讓這個(gè)小男孩的父母很氣憤。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要求，寫一篇英語短文：

1、簡(jiǎn)述事件的內(nèi)容

2、你的看法。

注意：1、詞數(shù)120左右；

2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

 

 

 

 

 

 

One possible version：

This morning when I read a newspaper, a piece of news attracted my attention. A kind-hearted boy at the age of nine pulled up and helped her when seeing an old woman fall over .However, the old woman insisted that the boy had treatment afterwards, which upset his parents. Fortunately, some witnesses happened to pass by and were willing to testify for the child. Therefore, the boy was not wronged at last.

I felt very bad after reading the news. How come a man has to face the risk of being deliberately harmed by the person he offers help to? If this is the price of helping others, I think few would dare to do any good deed. I hope that things of this kind will not happen again forever.

【解析】

試題分析：根據(jù)作文提供的要點(diǎn)說明可以判斷本文應(yīng)該寫成一篇夾敘夾議的文章。在謀篇布局時(shí)可以采用兩段式結(jié)構(gòu)，先簡(jiǎn)要敘述事件的內(nèi)容，然后對(duì)此發(fā)表看法。為了行文的需要可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容，但是不要過于繁瑣，注意文章的字?jǐn)?shù)要求。在時(shí)態(tài)方面，講述過去的事情應(yīng)該使用一般過去時(shí)，發(fā)表議論部分應(yīng)該使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。此外，為了提高文章檔次，要盡量使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)和高級(jí)詞匯。參考詞匯：in my opinion，do sb wrong，on purpose等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇書面表達(dá)段落分明，層次清晰。首段講述了故事的內(nèi)容經(jīng)過，第二段對(duì)此發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)看法。作者在文中使用了however，fortunately，therefore等過渡詞匯使句子與句子之間銜接緊湊，語義連貫。還使用了條件狀語從句If this is the price of helping others，賓語從句that things of this kind will not happen again forever，定語從句 which upset his parents.等復(fù)合句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。長(zhǎng)句How come a man has to face the risk of being deliberately harmed by the person he offers help to?的使用不僅表達(dá)了作者的質(zhì)疑也成為文章的另一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)。

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