Question

19．假定你是李華．你校將于周四晚上舉辦一場英語演講比賽．請你用英語給外教Charlie寫一封邀請函，邀請他擔任評委．要點如下：
1．比賽時間、地點：6月8日，周四晚7點至9點，報告廳．
2．演講主題：中西文化差異．
3．參賽選手：高二學生．
4．評判內(nèi)容：語音、語調(diào)（intonation）、內(nèi)容等．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Charlie，
I'm honored to invite you to be the judge of an English speech contest to be held this Thursday evening，July 6th，at the lecture hall．Competitors are from Grade Two and the topic of the speech is about culture differences between China and western countries．Speeches will be graded based on competitors'pronunciation，intonation and the content of the speech．The two-hour event will begin at 7：00 p．m．，and please be here a little earlier so I can explain to you more details．Please contact me at 1234567@qq．com if necessary．
Looking forward to your coming!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達是一封邀請信，要求根據(jù)學校將于周四晚上舉辦一場英語演講比賽．用英語給外教Charlie寫一封邀請函，邀請他擔任評委．應(yīng)該以第一人稱為主，用一般現(xiàn)在時和將來時來寫．要注意邀請信的格式：要先說明寫信的目的，然后交代1．比賽時間、地點：6月8日，周四晚7點至9點，報告廳．2．演講主題：中西文化差異．3．參賽選手：高二學生．4．評判內(nèi)容：語音、語調(diào)（intonation）、內(nèi)容等．最后交代希望對方到來．寫作時要注意目的明確，條理清楚，還要盡量使用一些高級詞匯和句型增加文章亮點
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：如不定式to invite you和to be held的運用，一般將來時的被動結(jié)構(gòu)will be graded；還運用了詞語be honored to，based on，Looking forward to等．
I'm honored to invite you to be the judge of an English speech contest to be held this Thursday evening，July 6th，at the lecture hall．（高分句型一）
Speeches will be graded based on competitors'pronunciation，intonation and the content of the speech．（高分句型二）
The two-hour event will begin at 7：00 p．m．，and please be here a little earlier so I can explain to you more details．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Charlie，
      I'm honored to invite you to be the judge of an English speech contest to be held this Thursday evening，July 6th，at the lecture hall．（高分句型一）Competitors are from Grade Two and the topic of the speech is about culture differences between China and western countries．Speeches will be graded based on competitors'pronunciation，intonation and the content of the speech．（高分句型二）The two-hour event will begin at 7：00 p．m．，and please be here a little earlier so I can explain to you more details．（高分句型三）Please contact me at 1234567@qq．com if necessary．
      Looking forward to your coming!
                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                           Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．