Question

現(xiàn)在正是穿暖花開(kāi)的好時(shí)節(jié)。你校學(xué)生會(huì)以“高中學(xué)生要不要參加春游活動(dòng)”為題，向?qū)W生做調(diào)查。根據(jù)下面所出示的調(diào)查結(jié)果，請(qǐng)你以“Whether Or Not Should Senior Students Go Spring Outing?”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，上交學(xué)生會(huì)。

65％的學(xué)生認(rèn)為                          35％的學(xué)生認(rèn)為

1.應(yīng)該春游。                            1.不應(yīng)該春游。

2.親近自然呼吸新鮮空氣,有利健康。，       2.期中考試結(jié)果未出，沒(méi)心情玩。

3.活動(dòng)使精神放松,大腦休息, 有利學(xué)習(xí)。    3.春游耽誤時(shí)間，耽誤學(xué)習(xí)。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右。    2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

 

Answer 1

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Possible version:

In response to the 21st National Water Saving Propaganda Week from May 13th to May 19th, 2012, the Students' Union of our school organized a series of activities with the theme of advocating a low-carbon lifestyle and promoting water saving on campus. To make the movement better known, the Students' Union put up some posters in the students' dormitories and the classroom buildings to call on the whole school to save every drop of water through daily good habits. Some students also visited the waterworks, getting to know how polluted water was made clean. After that, we held class meetings to exchange experience about saving water. Through these activities, we not only have come to learn how to use water resources properly but have also raised our awareness of saving energy.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，首先要認(rèn)真閱讀題目�，F(xiàn)在正是穿暖花開(kāi)的好時(shí)節(jié)。你校學(xué)生會(huì)以“高中學(xué)生要不要參加春游活動(dòng)”為題，向?qū)W生做調(diào)查。根據(jù)下面所出示的調(diào)查結(jié)果，請(qǐng)你以“Whether Or Not Should Senior Students Go Spring Outing?”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，上交學(xué)生會(huì)，可知這是一篇客觀的調(diào)查結(jié)果。需要些的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意題目要求100左右，寫(xiě)的字?jǐn)?shù)不要太多，也不能太少。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。