【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Almost all of us heard the story "Here Comes the Wolf" when we are little kids.What we can learn from the story is we must be honest.Therefore, there're lots of case of dishonesty nowadays.

Being honest does great harm to other people or to yourself.Take the case of fake milk powder for an example. After drink this kind of milk,the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin,what badly affected their health.To my great relief,the producers got punishing so that more serious consequences could be avoided.

【答案】1.are 改為were

2.is后加that

3.Therefore改為However

4.case改為cases

5.honest改為dishonest

6.or改為and

7.去掉an

8.drink改為drinking

9.what改為which

10.punishing改為punished

【解析】【1】……when we are little kids.當(dāng)我們是小孩子的時(shí)候,根據(jù)句意可判斷應(yīng)該是一般過去時(shí),故應(yīng)把a(bǔ)re 改為were 。

【2】What we can learn from the story is we must be honest.that做連詞引導(dǎo)表語從句的時(shí)候,that不可以省略,故應(yīng)在is后加that。

【3】Therefore, there're lots of case of dishonesty nowadays.上一句話:“What we can learn from the story is we must be honest”從這個(gè)故事我們認(rèn)識(shí)到我們必須誠實(shí),與此句話:現(xiàn)如今存在很多不誠實(shí)的現(xiàn)象,形成轉(zhuǎn)折,故應(yīng)把Therefore改為However 。

【4】there're lots of case of dishonesty nowadays.case意為:情況,為可數(shù)名詞,故應(yīng)把case改為cases。

【5】Being honest does great harm to other people or to yourself,根據(jù)常識(shí):應(yīng)該是不誠實(shí)對(duì)別人和自己都有害,故應(yīng)把honest改成dishonest。

【6】……does great harm to other people or to yourself,or意為:或者,含有選擇的意思,常用在否定句中,而此句話other people和 yourself是并列的,故應(yīng)把or改為and。

【7】Take the case of fake milk powder for an example.,固定搭配take……for example意為:拿……舉例,故應(yīng)去掉an 。

【8】 After drink this kind of milk,……介詞after后應(yīng)加動(dòng)詞ing形式,故應(yīng)把drink改為drinking。

【9】the babies had big heads while their legs and arms were still thin,what badly affected their health,which可用來引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句,what不能用于狀語從句和定語從句,故應(yīng)把what改為which。

【10】the producers got punishing so that more serious consequences could be avoided.固定搭配get+過去分詞是一種被動(dòng)形式,故應(yīng)把punishing改為punished。

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