Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有l(wèi)0處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2．只允許修改l0處，多者(從第ll處起)不計(jì)分。

Last Sunday, it was my father’s funny day. After supper, my father went to see the film. But in our surprise, he came back just about half an hour later. I asked him what was the matter. He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema. He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers. Surprising, they looked at their ticket carefully, only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different. So they looked at the tickets carefully. After a while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, “Sorry, I make a mistake. Take this seat, please.” The fact was that his ticket found out under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 the改成a

 In改成to

 What改成that

 While改成when

 her改成him

 Surprising改成Surprised

 ticket 改成tickets

 tickets ∧more

 make改成made

 去掉out

【解析】

試題分析：文章介紹爸爸上個(gè)星期在電影院發(fā)生的好笑的事情，爸爸在桌子的玻璃下發(fā)現(xiàn)了一張電影票，結(jié)果到電影院一看，有個(gè)婦女和他有同樣座位的票，就是顏色不同，原來爸爸這張票是一個(gè)月前的。

 句意：晚飯后，爸爸去看電影。泛指“一場(chǎng)電影”，the改成a

 使我們驚訝的是：to our surprise：In改成to

 他告訴我們電影院發(fā)生的有趣的事情。這是定語從句，先行詞是things，定語從句中缺少主語，用that引導(dǎo)定語從句，What不能引導(dǎo)定語從句

 句意：他正坐在座位上這時(shí)一個(gè)婦女過來了。While引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語，表示時(shí)間段，when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語，表示時(shí)間點(diǎn)

 一個(gè)婦女朝他走過來，這里的他是指爸爸，her改成him

 他們很驚訝，所以仔細(xì)的看了票。修飾人用Surprised

 因?yàn)樗麄兊钠庇袃蓮垼簍icket 改成tickets

 前面已經(jīng)仔細(xì)的看過這個(gè)票了，這時(shí)是更加仔細(xì)的看了票。More carefully

 因?yàn)槭巧蟼�(gè)星期的事情，用一般過去式：make改成made

 find out是查明，弄清，這里是他的票是在桌子上的玻璃下找到了，用find。

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)