5．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
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刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改僅限一詞．
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city．I think I would be happy there．Now I am   living in a city，but I miss my home in  countryside．There the air is clean or the mountains are  green．Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted．
Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously  problem．The airs we breath in is getting dirtier and dirtier．Much rare animals are dying out．We must found ways to protect your environment．If we fail to do so，we'll live to regret it．

分析 本文作者主要講述了環(huán)境污染所帶來的危害，從而呼吁人們必須找到一些方法來保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境．
文中講到：作者小時(shí)候非常向往城市生活，然而當(dāng)他真正生活在城市里時(shí)，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)隨著工業(yè)化的發(fā)展，環(huán)境已經(jīng)被污染．環(huán)境污染導(dǎo)致了全球變暖，使得人們呼吸的空氣也變得越來越臟，還導(dǎo)致了許多珍稀動(dòng)物正瀕臨滅絕．因此作者呼吁大家應(yīng)想盡辦法來保護(hù)環(huán)境．

解答 When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city．I think I would be happy there．Now I am living in a city，
                                                                         thought
but I miss my home in∧countryside．There the air is clean or the mountains are  green．Unf
                               the                                                 and
ortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted．
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Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously  problem．Theairs
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1．把think改為-thought     考查時(shí)態(tài)   這里說的是"When I was a child我小時(shí)候"，故用一般過去時(shí)
2．在countryside前加the   考查冠詞的用法  這里用在名詞之前，特指他家所在的農(nóng)村；故應(yīng)添加定冠詞the
3．把or改為and      考查連詞的用法   此處用來連接兩個(gè)表示并列的句子，即：空氣清新并且群山翠綠；故改為and
4．把on改為with     考查固定短語的用法  固定短語with the development of 意為：隨著…的發(fā)展；在句中作伴隨狀語
5．去掉been     考查語態(tài)  由于主語Lots of studies 與謂語動(dòng)詞show是主謂關(guān)系，故此處不能用被動(dòng)語態(tài)；故去掉been      
6   把seriously 改為serious    考查形容詞的用法    此處用來修飾名詞problem；故應(yīng)使用形容詞
7．把a(bǔ)irs改為air    考查不可數(shù)名詞的用法   由于air（空氣）是不可數(shù)名詞，所以不能加s
8．把much改為many   考查形容詞的用法   由于much修飾的是不可數(shù)名詞；而此處用來修飾可數(shù)名詞animals；故將其改為many
9．把found改為find  考查動(dòng)詞的用法  此處用于情態(tài)動(dòng)詞must之后，故應(yīng)使用動(dòng)詞的原形
10．把your改為our   考查人稱代詞的用法  由于此處的主語是我們we，因此與之相對應(yīng)的形容詞性的物主代詞應(yīng)是our

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯(cuò)是集語法知識與語言技能為一體的綜合性試題，主要考查學(xué)生對詞匯、語法和語篇三要素的把握能力．錯(cuò)誤類型一般有：缺詞、多詞和錯(cuò)詞．常見的錯(cuò)誤有：1 詞法錯(cuò)誤，主要包括動(dòng)詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此類試題時(shí)，需要正確分析句子成分，熟練掌握各詞類的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常見句法錯(cuò)誤．通常表現(xiàn)為簡單句、復(fù)合句以及疑問句、祈使句、感嘆句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句等錯(cuò)誤．解答此類試題時(shí)，需要掌握各類句子的句式結(jié)構(gòu)及意義用法．3 應(yīng)在理解文章大意的前提下，進(jìn)行作答．

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A．To encourage people to learn skating．
B．To advise skaters to wear safety pads．
C．To advertise for skating protective gear．
D．To introduce ways of protecting skaters．

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