Question

I went hiking to a mountain with my friend last summer. It was a good trip in the beginning and something unexpected happened halfway. One of my friends suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn’t move any far. Nobody knew how to deal it. One girl tried to call her mum over her mobile phone, but there is no signal in the mountain area. Lucky we had brought a tent with us. We put it up and let him to rest in it. After taken some pills, he drank some water and ate some food. After a while, I felt much better and we walked on. We all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain.

Answer 1

小題1:第一句：friend改成friends;
小題2:第二句：and改成but
小題3:第三句：far改成farther
小題4:第四句：deal 后加with
小題5:第五句：is改成was
小題6:第六句：Lucky改成Luckily
小題7:第七句：去掉rest前面的to
小題8:第八句：taken改成taking
小題9:第九句：I改成he
小題10:第十句：us改成ourselves

試題分析：
小題1:從后文可以看出不止一個(gè)朋友，所以friend用復(fù)數(shù)friends。   
小題2:前后表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，用but。
小題3:any修飾比較級(jí)所以far改成farther。
小題4:短語(yǔ)deal with“處理；解決”。
小題5:整篇文章用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，所以用there was。
小題6:句首用副詞，所以把lucky改成luckily。
小題7:let sb do sth “讓某人干某事”，所以把to去掉。
小題8:after是介詞，后面接doing，所以把taken改成taking。
小題9:句意：過(guò)了一會(huì)，他感覺(jué)好多了，我們繼續(xù)往前走。人稱(chēng)是he而不是I。
小題10:短語(yǔ)：enjoy oneself“玩得開(kāi)心”，所以把us改成ourselves。