【題目】慈善捐助正在我國流行開來。請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章,就慈善捐助談?wù)勀愕南敕,?nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:

1.慈善捐助對(duì)受惠人群會(huì)有哪些影響;

2.你最想加入的慈善組織是哪一類(助學(xué)、濟(jì)貧、關(guān)愛殘疾人……),理由是什么。

注意:

1.可參照以上內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;

3.開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Charity is becoming a popular word in China.

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【答案】Charity is becoming a popular word in China

Actively involved in the charitable work, many western billionaires like Zuckerberg have won themselves much praise. Meanwhile, charity in China also enjoys a boom with the perfection of the relevant legal system.

Donors’ unselfishness will make it easier for those in need to access good facilities and resources, making their future change for the better and fostering their sense of positive outlooks. In addition, the receivers will experience a high level of love and care and learn the virtue of being grateful, which will drive them to take responsibility for repaying the society.

Given a chance for charity, I would like to work for the children in the remote areas. Born in the underdeveloped country areas, most of them have to drop out of school due to poverty, leaving their compulsory education uncompleted. Our funding will cover their tuition and living costs, helping their life to get back on track.

【解析】本文是一篇要求講述慈善捐助的作文,概要已給出,慈善捐助正在我國流行開來,這給考生提供了比較明確的背景?忌枰(lián)系自己平常的所見、所聞和所想,把文章內(nèi)容寫的具體、鮮活并且要有說服力。成文時(shí)要注意:首先一定要提到慈善捐助在我國正流行開來,這為接下來的敘述提供背景;接著說慈善捐助對(duì)受惠人群的影響;最后說明自己最想加入的慈善組織,并說明理由。注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型,以提高文章的檔次;注意使用一些連接詞,使得文章表達(dá)自然、流暢。6.注意文章的字?jǐn)?shù)控制,150單詞左右。

本文的亮點(diǎn):本文要點(diǎn)齊全,布局合理,有效地使用語句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。在文章中運(yùn)用較為復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)。如:句子中含有定語從句,賓語從句等。使用變換多樣的句式、許多非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)和一些固定表達(dá)方式,這些句式在文章中出現(xiàn)讓人刮目相看,成為一個(gè)得分的亮點(diǎn)。同時(shí)文章里也出現(xiàn)了許多固定搭配和高級(jí)詞匯和地道的表達(dá),體現(xiàn)了作者對(duì)英語語言的駕馭能力。

復(fù)雜句:In addition, the receivers will experience a high level of love and care and learn the virtue of being grateful, which will drive them to take responsibility for repaying the society.

定語從句:…earn the virtue of being grateful, which will drive them to take responsibility for repaying the society….

非謂語結(jié)構(gòu):1. Actively involved in the charitable work…

2 …making their future change for the better and fostering their sense of positive outlooks.

3.Born in the underdeveloped country areas, most of them have to drop out of school due to poverty, leaving their compulsory education uncompleted.

4. Our funding will cover their tuition and living costs, helping their life to get back on track.

5.Donors’ unselfishness will make it easier for those in need to access good facilities and resources, making their future change for the better and fostering their sense of positive outlooks.

其他句式Given a chance for charity, I would like to work for the children in the remote areas.

…make it easier for those in need to access good facilities and resources

使用了連詞: In addition,… Meanwhile…

較多地使用了高級(jí)詞匯:foster their sense of positive outlooks,get back on track,drop out of school due to poverty,leave their compulsory education uncompleted.,enjoy a boom

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