Question

【題目】假設你是學校英語�？�“Speak0utyourmind”的編輯，最近收到一封署名李華的高三學生來信，信中抱怨：學校最近嚴格檢查晨讀的情況，要求學生必須大聲朗讀；該生認為每位同學有自己的學習方式，早上時間寶貴，應該采用適合自己的方式進行學習，才能收到最佳效果;學校不應該采取統(tǒng)一要求的方式。請你給這位同學回信,就此問題進行疏導，要點如下：

1.肯定晨讀的重要性和意義

2.大聲朗讀的好處(如提高記憶效率:增加學習氛圍等,)

3.鼓勵該學生排除雜念,大聲朗讀,從現(xiàn)在做起。

Dear Li Hua,

I am sorry to know that you are upset about morning reading_______________________________________

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Yours sincerely,

Richard

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Hua

As an old saying goes an hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.Therefore you are supposed to attach much importance to it if you want to improve your efficiency of study during such critical time.

Reading aloud in the morning is definitely of great benefit to study.To start with reading to oneself aloud just like having an audio recording can improve one’s reading and listening by mixing the audile and visual methods. Besides reading aloud with other classmates may well contribute to the good learning atmosphere which will in turn lift up one’s spirits thus making one progress in study.

All in all what you should do right now is to focus on you study getting rid of all the distracting thoughts.Read aloud from onw on and you’re sure to achieve your amazing goal.

【解析】試題分析：試題為應用文中的書信寫作，試題只給出寫作框架，并未給出所有的具體寫作細節(jié)，為半開放性寫作。寫好此文，需注意三點：一是寫信格式要準確，信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，但切要寫好信的結(jié)尾。二是要詳略得當，本文要點如下：1.肯定晨讀的重要性和意義2.大聲朗讀的好處(如提高記憶效率:增加學習氛圍等,)3.鼓勵該學生排除雜念,大聲朗讀,從現(xiàn)在做起。三要注意適當?shù)卦黾蛹毠?jié)，恰當?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，在寫作時要注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用。

【亮點說明】

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