Question

20．假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷（resume）．給外教Mr Jenkins 寫信，請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）
注意：
     1．詞數(shù)100左右；
     2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 根據(jù)題目要求可以知道是寫一封求助信--請(qǐng)求外教幫忙修改材料．寫作時(shí)需注意格式為書信．人稱主要為第一人稱和第二人稱．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．寫作要點(diǎn)是--1，問好；2，說明寫信的原因，提出請(qǐng)求；3，說明回信時(shí)間；4，表達(dá)感謝．
重點(diǎn)詞匯及短語：
personal resume 個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷
job application 工作申請(qǐng)書
part-time job兼職
social practice 社會(huì)實(shí)踐
format 格式
semester/term 學(xué)期
a company for international trading 國(guó)際貿(mào)易公司/外貿(mào)公司
consider…as…把…認(rèn)為是/當(dāng)作…
apply for a position 申請(qǐng)職位
be familiar with 熟悉某事
intend to do sth 策劃/想做某事
look forward to…期待某事
best regards 最好的祝福，誠(chéng)摯的問候，致敬
高分句型：
句型一：
In this way，we never consider learning as a difficult task．通過這種方式，我們從不覺得學(xué)習(xí)是件難事．
句型二：
As①it is getting close to the end of the semester and we need to find a part-time job for social practice，I intend to②apply one position in a company for international trading．
as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，表示附帶說明的"雙方已知的原因"，語氣比since弱，較為正式，位置較為靈活（常放于主句之前）．intend to…意圖做…
句型三：
So can you do me a favor ①to correct the mistakes of the words and format in these materials attached②in the e-mail？
do sb a favor幫助某人，本句表示尋求幫助
attached為過去分詞作后置定語，表示被動(dòng)，是指材料"被附加在郵件"上，主語為the material．

解答 Dear Mr Jenkins，
   Here is Li Hua．First of all，please accept my sincere appreciation for bringing us so many wonderful classes which I really enjoy during this semester．You are such an excellent teacher who always managed to make us learn from fun．In this way，we never consider learning as a difficult task．【高分句型一】（問好）Secondly，I want to ask you for help．As it is getting close to the end of the semester and we need to find a part-time job for social practise，I intend to apply one position in a company for international trading．【高分句型二】It is the first time for me to apply for a job，I am not quite familiar with the format of the resume and the job application which I have prepared．So can you do me a favor to correct the mistakes of the words and format in these materials attached in the e-mail？【高分句型三】I will be very grateful for your help．Millions of thanks．（說明寫信原因）
   I am looking forward to your reply．Please reply me before the date of 11th，October．（表達(dá)感謝）
Best regards，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考生在寫作時(shí)需明確寫作要點(diǎn)，注意寫作中人稱和時(shí)態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達(dá)流暢．考生在平時(shí)應(yīng)多注意�？嫉淖魑男问�，積累相關(guān)的短語和詞匯．