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4．假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給某報(bào)紙的編輯寫(xiě)一封信，介紹你校學(xué)生會(huì)組織的一個(gè)活動(dòng)．內(nèi)容如下：

活動(dòng)目的	為了更好地利用學(xué)習(xí)資料
活動(dòng)組織者	學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)
活動(dòng)時(shí)間	6月10日～20日
活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)	校圖書(shū)館一樓
活動(dòng)內(nèi)容	倡議高三年級(jí)同學(xué)在畢業(yè)之際捐出用過(guò)的書(shū)等，贈(zèng)給低年級(jí)同學(xué)．
活動(dòng)意義	1、活動(dòng)得到老師們的支持和夸獎(jiǎng) 2、該活動(dòng)增進(jìn)友誼，鼓勵(lì)節(jié)約
個(gè)人看法	個(gè)人支持活動(dòng)，并希望這樣的活動(dòng)以后還能繼續(xù)開(kāi)展下去

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參考詞匯：增進(jìn)promote　鼓勵(lì)節(jié)約encourage economy
Dear editor，
I am a student of Senior Three in a middle school in Guangdong Province．
Inorder that we can make the best of learning materials，the Students'Union of our school is arranging anactivity，which will be held on the first floor ofthe school library from June 10 to 20．We studentsof Senior Three are called on to give away our used books，newspapers or magazines to the students in the lowergrades．The idea，which isintended for promoting friendship and encouraging economy，is highly praised and supported by the teachers andstudents alike．As a student，I am strongly for the activity because it is verymeaningful and helpful．
I hope that this kind ofactivity will continue in the future．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"表格+提綱類(lèi)"形式，根據(jù)文章所給提示信息寫(xiě)一封信，介紹學(xué)校組織的一個(gè)活動(dòng)的情況．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．活動(dòng)目的；2．活動(dòng)組織者；3．活動(dòng)時(shí)間；4．活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)；5．活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；6．活動(dòng)意義7．個(gè)人看法． 既是提綱作文又是圖表類(lèi)作文．
寫(xiě)作時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)為主．
重要短語(yǔ)：makethe best of （利用），arrange sth（安排某事），call on （號(hào)召），give away （捐贈(zèng)），be intended for （目的是），be for （支持），in order that（為了），promote friendship（增進(jìn)友誼）．
【高分句型】
1．the Students'Union of our school is arranging an activity，which will be held on the first floor of the school library from June 10 to 20．
這里是which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which在定語(yǔ)從句作主語(yǔ)，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．
2．The idea，which is intended for promoting friendship and encouraging economy，is highly praised and supported by the teachers and students alike．
這里是which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是the idea，which在定語(yǔ)從句中作主語(yǔ)．整個(gè)句子的主語(yǔ)是the idea，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞是is praised and supported．

解答 Dear editor，
 I am a student of Senior Three in a middleschool in Guangdong Province．
Inorder that we can make the best of learning materials，（活動(dòng)目的）the Students'Union of our school is arranging an activity，which willbe held on the first floor of the school library from June 10 to 20．【高分句型】（活動(dòng)組織者、活動(dòng)時(shí)間、活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)）Westudents of Senior Three are called on to give away our used books，newspapers or magazines to the students in the lowergrades．（活動(dòng)內(nèi)容）The idea，which isintended for promoting friendship and encouraging economy，is highly praised and supported by the teachers andstudents alike．【高分句型】（活動(dòng)意義） As a student，I am strongly for the activity because it is verymeaningful and helpful．（個(gè)人看法）
I hope that this kindof activity will continue in the future．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)好這類(lèi)圖表及提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真分析所給提示信息，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，并認(rèn)真看圖，圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮想象，語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔．選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等．