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【題目】請閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

The University of Cambridge confirmed on Monday that it had been using scores from China's national college entrance examination, or gaokao, as part of its admission criteria for Chinese students for several years.

It says in Weibo post, however, that it does not admit students only based on their test scores.

The University statement came after some Chinese media reported over the weekend that the university would start to admit Chinese students that ranked in the top 0.1 percent in the gaokao in their province, indicating that it would try to compete for talent with top universities in China.

The news immediately became one of the most viewed topics on social media, being read by 280 million users on Sina Weibo.

The gaokao is increasingly accepted by universities in Australia, the United States, Canada and Europe. The University of New Hampshire became the first US state university to accept the gaokao in its entrance criteria last year. The test is also recognized by 30 universities in Australia and 30 in Canada, as well as colleges in Italy, France and Spain.

［寫作內容］

1.用約30個單詞概述上述信息的主要內容；

2.談談劍橋大學接受中國高考成績對你的啟示，用2-3個理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。

［寫作要求］

1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；

3.不必寫標題。

［評分標準］

內容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。

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Answer 1

【答案】The University of Cambridge announced that it had been accepting China's gaokao scores when admitting students for several years. Actually, more and more universities in Western countries have begun to accept the gaokao.

From where I stand, the gaokao's gaining more international acceptance conveys the messages that China is becoming much stronger and more influential on the world stage. First of all, China has created numerous economic miracles since its reform and opening up. It's known to all that China is the world's second largest economy and its GDP has been increasing rapidly in the past 40 years. Secondly, China has made great achievements in science and technology. Let's take " four new great inventions " for example. High-speed railways, electronic payments, shared bicycles and online shopping have completely changed the world. Last but not the least, China's soft power has been improved. As a country with a history of 5000 years, China has been spreading its culture throughout the world. More and more foreign countries begin to show interest in, and respect for China.

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于讀后任務類作文，要求考生根據(jù)題干所給文章，按照寫作要求寫出寫作內容。

第一步：審題

類別：讀后任務

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在完成時為主。

結構：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。

要求：1.概述上述信息的主要內容；

2. 劍橋大學接受中國高考成績的啟示，以及理由。

第二步:列提綱 （行文脈絡）

第一段，通過閱讀所給文章，可以總結出主要內容：劍橋大學宣布，它在錄取學生時已經(jīng)接受中國的高考分數(shù)很多年了。事實上，越來越多的西方國家的大學已經(jīng)開始接受高考。

第二段為啟示部分，要從個人角度來看，根據(jù)題目要求，需要寫出2-3個理由或論據(jù)支撐個人看法。啟示為：高考獲得更多的國際認可，傳達出中國在世界舞臺上變得更強大、更有影響力的信息。理由如下：首先，改革開放以來，中國創(chuàng)造了無數(shù)的經(jīng)濟奇跡。眾所周知，中國是世界第二大經(jīng)濟體，在過去的40年里，中國的GDP一直在快速增長。第二，中國在科學技術方面取得了巨大成就。讓我們以“四大發(fā)明”為例。高速鐵路、電子支付、共享單車和網(wǎng)上購物徹底改變了世界。最后，中國的軟實力得到了提升。作為一個有五千年歷史的國家，中國一直在向世界傳播自己的文化。越來越多的國家開始對中國表現(xiàn)出興趣和尊重。

列提綱 （重點詞組）

Admit; on the world stage; First of all; It's known to all; GDP; Secondly; make achievements; for example; Last but not the least; soft power; show interest in; show respect for.

第三步：連詞成句

1. From where I stand, the gaokao's gaining more international acceptance conveys the messages that China is becoming much stronger and more influential on the world stage.

2. China has created numerous economic miracles since its reform and opening up.

3. It's known to all that China is the world's second largest economy and its GDP has been increasing rapidly in the past 40 years.

4. China has made great achievements in science and technology..

5. High-speed railways, electronic payments, shared bicycles and online shopping have completely changed the world.

6. China's soft power has been improved.

7. More and more foreign countries begin to show interest in, and respect for China.

根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結構順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉折對比關系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改