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隨著信息技術(shù)的快速發(fā)展，網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言以其快捷的傳播方式進(jìn)入了人們的生活。根據(jù)某機(jī)構(gòu)最近對某市中學(xué)生的調(diào)查，發(fā)現(xiàn)中學(xué)生對網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言的使用看法不一，結(jié)果如下：

支持者	網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言是信息時代發(fā)展的產(chǎn)物，是草根文化的新形式； 易懂，易學(xué)，使用快捷方便； 網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言很酷很有趣，豐富了校園文化生活，緩解了學(xué)習(xí)壓力。
反對者	有些網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言粗魯，庸俗； 漢語言是傳統(tǒng)文化的基礎(chǔ)，過多地使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言會使下一代逐漸淡忘傳統(tǒng)文化；
你的觀點(diǎn)	（不少于兩點(diǎn)）

請給21世紀(jì)英語報(bào)寫一篇題為Is cyber language dangerous？的報(bào)道，陳述以上的調(diào)查結(jié)果并發(fā)表你自己的看法。

注意：1. 不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 詞數(shù)150字左右；開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3. 參考詞匯： 草根文化 grass-roots culture; 庸俗 vulgar

Is cyber language dangerous ？

With the development of information technology, cyber language has stepped into our life and is spreading rapidly. According to a survey recently conducted among high school students, there are various views about the use of cyber language.

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Answer 1

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Is cyber language dangerous ？

With the development of information technology, cyber language has stepped into our life and is spreading rapidly. According to a survey recently conducted among high school students, there are various views about the use of cyber language.

The supporters think cyber language is a product of the information age, which can be regarded as a new form of grass-roots culture. They also think cyber language words are easy to learn or understand, so they are convenient to use. Besides, cyber language can not only enrich their school life but also ease the pressure of studying because many words used online are fun and cool.

However, many students reject the use of cyber language. Firstly, cyber language words are rude and vulgar. Secondly, the Chinese language is the foundation of our great culture. Overusing cyber language will cause young people to gradually forget our traditional culture.

In my opinion , it is dangerous to use too much cyber language, for it may well do great harm to our mother tongue. As the foundation of the traditional culture, the Chinese language is the standard language. We teenagers should learn it well and at the same time go all out to hand down our fine traditional culture.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇表述觀點(diǎn)看法的作文，文章的要點(diǎn)基本給出，但是需要考生根據(jù)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行拓展發(fā)揮，而且不能有遺漏。根據(jù)提示信息可知文章應(yīng)該包括三個方面內(nèi)容，一是贊同的觀點(diǎn)；二是反對的看法；三是表明自己的態(tài)度。在時態(tài)選擇上應(yīng)使用第一人稱，而且要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時要注意使用合適的連接詞來增加語言的連貫性，如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文層次清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)分明，分別用三個自然段來表述三個要點(diǎn)。在文中作者使用了高級詞匯和多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，如定語從句which can be regarded as a new form of grass-roots culture，并列句They also think cyber language words are easy to learn or understand, so they are convenient to use和for it may well do great harm to our mother tongue.，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。此外，連接詞的準(zhǔn)確使用也是一大特色，如表述遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的besides，表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的however，以及表示順序的firstly，secondly等。

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