Question

【題目】閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

Every child has his own dream. Every child hopes to be an adult. All of them think it is a good thing to grow up, However, is it truly like what they imagine? As a boy who lives in modern times, I still clearly remember the happiness of my childhood. What a good time we had! We didn’t need to study all the time and our task was to play. We had no worries. Unluckily, we had to face the reality following time’s passing. We began to gradually feel this invisible pressure coming upon us. We had less spare time for playing and had to give more of our time for homework. Our stress was coming! We get up before sunrise and return after sunset. We work and study like an adult, even harder. What we do is in order to get an excellent mark. Oh, growing up is extremely boring. Perhaps each child will have or has had the stress of growing up; the most important thing for us to solve our worries. We must try to find happiness while growing up so that we can get a balance.

[寫作內(nèi)容]

1. 以約30個詞概括短文的要點；

2. 然后以約120個詞就“成長是快樂的還是煩惱的” 這個主題發(fā)表你的看法，至少包含以下內(nèi)容要點，該部分詞數(shù)約120詞。

1). 簡述你在成長過程中的快樂或煩惱；

2). 你對成長的快樂或煩惱的看法。

[寫作要求]

1). 可以使用實例或其它論述方法支持你的論點，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子;

2). 標題自定

Answer 1

【答案】

The writer of the passage tells us that we had enough time to play in our childhood. While we are growing up, worries come upon us and our spare time is less but homework more. So we felt growing up boring.

As far as I am concerned, growing up is really boring. As a teenager, I have to deal with a lot of worries while growing up. I have to go to school very early in the morning and get home very late in the evening. And I have to take all kinds of exams every year. I am also worried about being misunderstood by friends and losing them. Although we face worries, we should seek support from our friends, parents and teacher to solve them and try to find pleasure in growing up. In fact, the path of adolescence is full of sunshine. Why not enjoy the pleasure of growing up and its delicious taste?

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達是一篇讀寫任務(wù)寫作。本書面表達的要求考生首先用30個單詞概括所給的文字，然后再給出自己的評判。不管考生是贊成還是反對哪一觀點，都要提供足夠的理由或者論據(jù)。首先，概括部分考查了學生的概括能力，學生再概括的時候要注意語言的精煉性，要點要齊全。其次，闡述的理由或論據(jù)要簡潔明了，層次分明。最后，對自己的觀點要作出總結(jié)。

【亮點說明】范文用了一些詞組：如grow up, come upon, As far as sb. be concerned, deal with, in fact, be full of]等等。句型上也是多變：As far as I am concerned, growing up is really boring.這句話用了動名詞作主語，As a teenager, I have to deal with a lot of worries while growing up.這句話運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語等等。