Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同學(xué)之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的一下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（?），并在其下寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意： 1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear editor,

In the past my hometown was used to be a beautiful place. Thick trees and green grass could be seen in everywhere. In order to build house and grow more crops, people cut down more and more trees. With time went on, the whole forest was almost destroyed. Gradually the green hills have changed into wasteland. As a result, sandstorms struck us now and then, which we suffer a lot. But I do hope all the people should realize the terribly result of not caring about our environment. What's more, they should take good care of the forests and plant trees instead cutting them down to improve our living conditions.

 

Answer 1

1.去掉was

2.去掉in

3.house 改為houses

4.with 改為as;或 went改為going

5.struck 改為strike

6.of 改為from

7.But改為so

8.terribly改為terrible

9.they改為we

10.instead后加of

【解析】

試題分析：這是作者寫(xiě)給編輯的信，信中介紹作者的家鄉(xiāng)曾經(jīng)是一個(gè)美麗的地方。但是因?yàn)榭撤��?shù)木，森林遭受?chē)?yán)重的損害，隨之而來(lái)的是空氣污染和沙塵暴頻發(fā)，作者呼吁所有的人都意識(shí)到這個(gè)不關(guān)心環(huán)境的可怕的后果。

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考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)