Question

5．假設(shè)你是李華．期末將至，你的美國朋友Danny來信希望了解你的暑假安排．請根據(jù)以下提示用英語為其寫一封回信，并簡述理由．
1．幫父母做家務(wù)；2．鍛煉身體；3．參加社會活動；4．加強課外閱讀；5．完成暑假作業(yè)．
要求：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Danny，
I am very glad to hear from you．Now，I'd like to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation．         ．
Wish you a happy holiday．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息針對暑假安排，寫一封回信，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：幫父母做家務(wù)；鍛煉身體；參加社會活動；加強課外閱讀；完成暑假作業(yè)． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：First and foremost，it's of vital importance to help our parents do chorces and chat with them．句中it作形式主語；恰當?shù)倪^渡詞，如 By the way順便說一下；First and foremost，首先；Besides另外；Additionally另外；Last but not least最后且最重要．

解答 Dear Danny，
      I am very glad to hear from you．Now，I'd like to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation．With the summer holiday approaching，I have had a plan about how to spend my holiday and how to make a meaningful vacation．
      By the way，I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation．（主題句） First and foremost，it's of vital importance to help our parents do chorces and chat with them．（拓展句1）Besides，I would do a part time job，so that my interpersonal skills would be improved．（拓展句2）Additionally，joining in some socia activities is indispensible．Maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a teaching assistant（拓展句3）Last but not least，it is necessary for me to read some books  and finish my homework．（拓展句4）
　　These are my plan for the summer vacation．What's yours？I am looking forward to your earliest reply．（以合理的客套話結(jié)尾）
       Wish you a happy holiday．
                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                       Li Hua．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．