Question

15．假設(shè)你是李華，你們班的英語老師 要求每個(gè)同學(xué)在課堂上分享自己交友的經(jīng)驗(yàn)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿．
1．你是如何看待友誼的；
2．你是怎么選擇朋友的；
3．你是如何維持與朋友之間的友誼的．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I like to choose people who are kind，honest and helpful as my friends．
高分句型二：
I always go out with my friends，chatting and playing．
句型一  who are kind，honest and helpful as my friends．該句是一個(gè)由who引導(dǎo)的定語從句，who再從句中做主語，替代先行詞people．
句型二 I always go out with my friends，chatting and playing．該句中的chatting and playing是現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語．

解答 As the saying goes，"Friendship is like sunshine，it keeps us warm and helps us grow．"（友誼的意義）I think it is important for us to make good friends so that we can always hang out together and have fun．I like to choose people who are kind，honest and helpful as my friends．（高分句型一）I like to share my thoughts and fears with them whenever I get into trouble．Now I have some good friends who trust me．I always care about what has happened to them，so I call them once a week．I always go out with my friends，chatting and playing．（維護(hù)友誼的方法）（高分句型二）I try to offer some advice to my friends when necessary．In this way I am able to maintain friendships．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是寫一篇發(fā)言稿．寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)在題干中羅列清晰，只需要詳述三大要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮即可．發(fā)表個(gè)人見解多使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．寫作過程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性．