Question

14．假設(shè)你是李華，請給你美國的筆友Tom回信，告訴他你今年春節(jié)是如何度過的．
1春節(jié)在寒假期間，你和父母一起準(zhǔn)備；
2春節(jié)前，大掃除，買東西，如食物、新衣服等；
3你本來要跟父母去串門，卻生病了，因為吃太多油膩的食物；
4這個春節(jié)讓你明白，健康需要平衡的飲食，尤其多吃蔬菜水果，定期進(jìn)行體育鍛煉．
注意：1詞數(shù)100左右；
2開頭和結(jié)尾為你寫好，不計入詞數(shù)；
Dear Tom，
In your last letter，you asked me about the Spring Festival this year，                                 ．
Expecting your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息請給你美國的筆友Tom回信，告訴他你今年春節(jié)是如何度過的，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：春節(jié)在寒假期間，你和父母一起準(zhǔn)備；春節(jié)前，大掃除，買東西，如食物、新衣服等；你本來要跟父母去串門，卻生病了，因為吃太多油膩的食物；這個春節(jié)讓你明白，健康需要平衡的飲食，尤其多吃蔬菜水果，定期進(jìn)行體育鍛煉．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：prepare for 為…作準(zhǔn)備；including 包括；couldn't wait to do迫不及待地去做；unluckily不幸的是；a balanced diet平衡飲食；keep fit保持健康；Above all畢竟；Besides另外；
The Spring Festival just happened during my winter holiday，so I had enough time to help my parents prepare for it．（高分句型一）
I couldn't wait to visit our relatives with my parents during the festival，but unluckily，I fell ill．（高分句型二）
The reason was that I had eaten too much fatty food．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       In your last letter，you asked me about the Spring Festival this year．Now let me tell you how I spent it．
       The Spring Festival just happened during my winter holiday，so I had enough time to help my parents prepare for it．（高分句型一）Before the Spring Festival，we cleaned our house completely and bought many things，including different kinds of food and new clothing．I couldn't wait to visit our relatives with my parents during the festival，but unluckily，I fell ill．（高分句型二）The reason was that I had eaten too much fatty food．（高分句型三）
       The unhappy Spring Festival lets me know a balanced diet is necessary to keep fit．Above all，there must be enough vegetables and fruits．Besides，we should exercise regularly．
       Expecting your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                      Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．