Question

5．請閱讀下面文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150 詞左右的文章．
A netizen wrote on Weibo on Sept 11regarding a couple's shameful behavior of carving their names on a 300-year-old vat at the Palace Museum and called for the museum to report the case to the police．
The post caused a heated discussion online．Some criticized the offending behavior，saying，"I don't want to visit the Palace Museum only to find relics being carved by immoral tourists．"Others said it is common that ancient relics in Palace Museum are being damaged and laws should be introduced．
Apart from random carvings，the Palace Museum has met several cases of shameful behaviors this year．In March open-air relics were trampled（踩踏） and in May unclothed models were photographed riding on ancient relics in the museum's courtyard．
Similar incidents take place every year．In 2013，a visitor named Liang Qiqi cut"Liang Qiqi has come here"on a vat in the tourist attraction，causing a mass internet hunting．Worse still，in 2013，a Chinese boy carved his name on a stone sculpture at an ancient temple in Egypt and produced widespread reaction worldwide．

【寫作內(nèi)容】1．用約30個單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；
2．結(jié)合上述信息，簡要分析這種行為的不良影響；
3．從社會和個人兩方面談?wù)勅绾翁嵘龂�民素質(zhì)（不少于兩點(diǎn)）．
【寫作要求】1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3．不必寫標(biāo)題．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，在總結(jié)材料提供的信息的基礎(chǔ)上完成寫作，寫作內(nèi)容包括：1．用約30個單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；2．結(jié)合上述信息，簡要分析這種行為的不良影響；3．從社會和個人兩方面談?wù)勅绾翁嵘龂�民素質(zhì)（不少于兩點(diǎn)）． 時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱用第一和第三人稱．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：do damage to （破壞）；cultural relics（文化遺跡）；scandals（丑聞）；without doubt （毫無疑問，無可置疑地）；vital （重要的）； historic sites （歷史名勝）；In a word（總之，一句話）；calls for （要求，提倡）．
高分句型：1．For one thing，they will damage the original beauty of historic relics and even distort the message they carry．For another，with the exposure of these scandals worldwide，China's national image is without doubt spoiled despite a civilization of thousands of years．
                ①For one thing…，F(xiàn)or another…一方面…，另一方面…②with the exposure of these scandals worldwide是介詞短語在句中作狀語．
                 2．Therefore，it's an urgent issue to improve the qualities of the whole nation．
                 it在句中作形式主語，真正的主語是不定式短語to improve the qualities of the whole nation．
                 3．Besides，it's vital to educate individuals about the importance of preserving historic sites and to encourage them to behave themselves wherever they travel．
                  it作形式主語，and連接的兩個不定式短語是并列成分，作句子的真正主語．

解答 The passage presents some news about Chinese tourists'uncivilized actions in scenic spots．They show disrespect for and even do damage to cultural relics．Such offending behaviors have triggered intense criticism and accusation．
      Such uncivilized behaviors can have serious consequences．For one thing，they will damage the original beauty of historic relics and even distort the message they carry．For another，with the exposure of these scandals worldwide，China's national image is without doubt spoiled despite a civilization of thousands of years（高分句型一）．
      Therefore，it's an urgent issue to improve the qualities of the whole nation（高分句型二）．The government should strengthen supervision and impose severe punishment for such behaviors．Besides，it's vital to educate individuals about the importance of preserving historic sites and to encourage them to behave themselves wherever they travel（高分句型三）．In a word，it calls for joint efforts from the government and ordinary people to maintain and establish a good reputation of civilization．

點(diǎn)評 讀寫任務(wù)寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合起來，要求考生在讀懂文章信息的基礎(chǔ)上，按照要求有條理地寫出所要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，提高文章的檔次．