Question

每年五月的第二個(gè)星期日是母親節(jié)。母親節(jié)到來之際，為了表達(dá)對天下母親的崇高敬意，請你以為母親節(jié)為話題，寫一篇約120詞的作文。
[寫作內(nèi)容]
要點(diǎn)：1. 節(jié)日時(shí)間和意義
2. 回憶一件母親做的讓你印象深刻的事
3. 今年的母親節(jié)你打算如何做
[寫作要求] 作文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)] 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

Answer 1

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Mothers’ Day falls on the second Sunday of May, with the purpose of showing children’s gratitude towards their great mothers.
Mother’ Day is a good time for me to respect and love my mother. I still remember the most impressive thing she did for me. One night, I suddenly fell ill. Unluckily, my father was away from home and it was raining heavily. Seeing I was felling terribly uncomfortable, she carried me on her back and rushed me to a near clinic without any hesitation. In order to protect me from rain, she got almost wet to the skin.
With the great day coming soon, I have been preparing for it for a long time. I am going to make a special cake, with a little note on the top, describing everything she has done for me since I could remembered things, which is filled with her devotion and love for me.

試題分析：考生如果想拿到高分，必須按照要求在作文中覆蓋試題規(guī)定的所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，完成試題任務(wù)，達(dá)到預(yù)期的寫作目的。在寫作時(shí)，考生應(yīng)該留心是否要點(diǎn)完整，是否有要點(diǎn)遺漏。在題示要點(diǎn)完整的前提下，考生可以作文材料為中心進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)匕l(fā)揮，適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充一部分，以期使作文更加完美。
點(diǎn)評：考生要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，盡可能的使用較復(fù)雜的句子結(jié)構(gòu)，盡量使用高級詞匯以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)�？忌�注意使用過渡詞或者過渡句來使文章讀起來比較流暢。動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作練習(xí)以外，還可以適當(dāng)背誦一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。