Question

13．As we all know，life is full of dreams and having a good dream is of great importance in our daily life．Without a good dream，people can't make progress； without a good dream，countries can't develop； without a good dream，the world can't become so beautiful!And I hold the strong belief that everyone，whether he is old or young，poor or rich，junior or senior，does have a good dream!After all，dreaming is certainly a positive part of our life，and wishing for good things，however，costs nothing!
What's more，it is important to fly our dreams，especially for those who are Senior 3 students．It is high time for them to fly their dreams．If they can't let their dreams fly，the dream would just die!
Therefore，it is no wonder that so many people have a dream since their childhood．With a nice dream，China succeeded to host the 29th Olympic Games in 2008； with a nice dream，Hong Kong returned to the motherland peacefully in 1997； with a nice dream，Yuan Longping rids the world of hunger； with a nice dream，Michael Jordon becomes the most popular basketball star； with a nice dream I can stand on this stage to compete in the final English speech contest．And with an aim of achieving success，I must do the best!
So my good friends，if you want to realize your dream，please do not be afraid in face of difficulties or give up in face of failure nor lose your dream in face of pains．You must keep going forward bravely!Just fly your dream highly above the sky!
【寫作內容】
1．閱讀短文后用30詞左右概括短文的要點．
2．就"放飛夢想"為主題，以120詞左右發(fā)表自己的看法，并包括以下內容要點：
（1）列舉自己或身邊現實生活中中學生夢想成真的一件事例；
（2）結合自己的實際，談談你現在的夢想，并說明打算如何實現．
【寫作要求】
     1．在作文中可以使用自己親身的經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
     2．作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱．
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Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Although some of my classmates often went to the movies in the evening，seldom did I take part in such activities．
該句型使用了although引導的讓步狀語從句，seldom否定副詞，使用倒裝句；
高分句型二）Of course，whether my dream will come true depends on my personal efforts．
whether引導主語從句；
高級詞匯：motivation 動力；madk up my mind 下決心做；catch up with 追的上； take part in 參加；depend on 依靠；ups and downs起起落落．

解答 Dreams play an important role in our daily life and a good dream is the motivation to success．To realize a dream，one should learn to defeat difficulties through constant struggles as well as persistence．（30個詞概括）
　�。�列舉事例）Like most people，there was a time when I dreamed of being an excellent student in my English after entering junior middle school，though my English was very poor then．To catch up with my classmates，I made up my mind to learn English well and made pen-friends with some foreign students so as to practise my spoken English and improve my written English．（高分句型一）Although some of my classmates often went to the movies in the evening，seldom did I take part in such activities．Instead，I set aside to concentrate on my English and won the Final English Speech Contest around the city this term，realizing my dream．
　�。ㄗ约旱膲粝耄㎞ow，I also have a dream．As a Senior 3 student，I hope that I can be admitted to a key university after graduation from middle school．（高分句型二）Of course，whether my dream will come true depends on my personal efforts．Although life is full of ups and downs，I choose to go forward bravely．I strongly believe that where there is a dream，there is hope and there is a way．

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．