Question

一年一度的校園文化節(jié)又拉開了序幕，但今年學(xué)生卻沒有表現(xiàn)出像往年的興趣和熱情面對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象，有人提出校園文化節(jié)還要不要舉辦的問題，這引起了同學(xué)們的討論。上周末你班也進(jìn)行了一場(chǎng)討論。大多數(shù)同學(xué)都支持校園文化節(jié)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面所提供的內(nèi)容將討論結(jié)果做一總結(jié)，字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。

支持的原因：1. 給學(xué)生創(chuàng)造了展示自我才華的舞臺(tái)；

2. 有利于提高學(xué)習(xí)興趣；

3.豐富校園文化，活躍校園氣氛。

注意：1. 行文連貫，內(nèi)容完整；

2. 題目和開頭語已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3. 總詞數(shù)100左右。

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The annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again, but this year students did not show their great interest and passion for it as before.__________________________________

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Answer 1

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One possible version：

To be continued

  The annual campus cultural festival has drawn back its curtain again , but this year students did not show their great interest and passion for it as before .Many students believe that campus cultural festival can offer a wonderful stage for students to show their talents.Apart from helping students promote their interest in study, a series of activities also enrich the campus culture and make campus atmosphere more active.

  In addition , more students will be motivated to develop their potential abilities which will make them qualified for their future positions .On the other hand , students will find it a good chance to relax themselves as well as gain much knowledge that can’t be found in the book.

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試題分析：此篇書面表達(dá)要求對(duì)校園文化節(jié)還要不要舉辦的討論結(jié)果做出總結(jié)。在寫作時(shí)同學(xué)們要注意先要說明討論的事件，然后再講述討論結(jié)果。在講述事件時(shí)可以用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，而在發(fā)表個(gè)人見解時(shí)須采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或者根據(jù)需要使用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)。此外在寫作時(shí)注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，而且還要恰當(dāng)選用連接詞以使行文連貫，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章要點(diǎn)全面，語言豐富。短文中高級(jí)詞匯motivated，qualified，promote以及長(zhǎng)句的使用顯示了作者較高的語言運(yùn)用能力，而且短語Apart from helping students promote their interest in study, In addition，On the other hand 等的恰當(dāng)使用不僅使文章上下銜接緊湊，語句連貫，而且也避免了文章句式的單一，總之這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。