Question

10．假設(shè)你是李華，David是你的美國網(wǎng)友．他對目前中國出現(xiàn)的霧霾天氣很關(guān)注，來信向你詢問此事．請你給他寫封回信．
主要內(nèi)容如下：
1．感謝他的關(guān)注．
2．簡介霧霾 （smog） 天氣給人們的身體、生活帶來的危害．
3．談?wù)勀愕母邢耄?br />注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫流暢；
開頭與結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)；
詞數(shù)：100左右
Dear David，
I'm glad to receive your letter．
．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于霧霾天氣的書信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一感謝他的關(guān)注；二簡介霧霾  天氣給人們的身體、生活帶來的危害；三自己的感想．
高分句型：
1．I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China．句子里 that 引導(dǎo)同位語從句，解釋your letter 的內(nèi)容；which引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指先行詞the smog．
從你的來信我知道你對目前在中國的一些地方頻繁出現(xiàn)的霧霾天氣很關(guān)注．
2．Only when everyone has the environmental awareness can we have cleaner air．句子里Only 位于句首，引導(dǎo)狀語從句when everyone has the environmental awareness 主句can we have cleaner air用倒裝．
只有每個(gè)人都有了環(huán)保意識(shí)，我們才會(huì)有更清潔的空氣．

解答 Dear David，
   I'm glad to receive your letter．I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China．【高分句型一】Thank you for your concern．（感謝他的關(guān)注）I'm also very worried about such terrible weather because it has brought much inconvenience or rather harm to people's health such as traffic jam，road accidents，bad coughs，throat hurts and ever lung cancers and so on．（簡介霧霾  天氣給人們的身體、生活帶來的危害）
   As everybody knows，a good environment comes from good protection．So we should do what we can to make a difference．Try to drive less and choose air-friendly products．Only when everyone has the environmental awa reness can we have cleaner air．【高分句型二】（自己的感想）
  Hoping to hear from you soon and share your good ideas．
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 考查提綱類作文．
寫完作文以后，通讀全文，檢查內(nèi)容是否符合要求，要點(diǎn)是否齊全，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否合乎要求．最主要的是要檢查句子是否符合英語習(xí)慣，句型是否正確，語法是否正確（包括句子結(jié)構(gòu)、時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致等），檢查單詞是否誤寫、少寫，習(xí)語搭配是否得當(dāng)?shù)龋�以及字母大小寫、�?biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是否正確等，這就要求考生在定稿認(rèn)真檢查，仔細(xì)核對，及時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)并改正問題，保證要點(diǎn)齊全，句子完整通順，力爭減少失誤．