Question

12．假定你是某中學的學生李華．請用英語給出版社的編輯寫一封信，表達你對現(xiàn)在使用的英語教材的看法，內容主要包括：
優(yōu)點：1．話題廣泛；2．圖片豐富；3．有助于提高學習興趣．
建議：適當降低詞匯難度．
注意：1．詞數100左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數．
提示詞：（話題 topic，）
Dear Editor，
As a student reader，I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house．              
Best regards，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇說明自己觀點的寫作，要點已給出，首先把要點翻譯一下，然后用適當的連接詞把它們組成篇章，也可以適當的添加一下內容，多使用自己熟悉的句型，而且句式要有變化，用詞要準確，一定要注意整篇文章的連貫和語言的準確，使文章讀起來不顯得單調．在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯，和合適的連接詞如what's more，however，therefore等．同時可以穿插使用一些高級的句型，如強調句，狀語從句等，可以讓文章更上一個檔次．寫完后要反復仔細的閱讀，修改一下不足之處．

解答 Dear Editor，
    As a student reader，I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house．These books have many advantages．One of them is that we can find a variety of topics，such as science，culture and history．（高分句型一）These topics，I think，are very popular with us students．What's more，along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures，which can help us understand English better．（高分句型二）Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject．（高分句型三）However，some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us．Therefore，I'd like to suggest changing them into easier ones．
                                                                                                                                                                       Best regards，
                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點評 寫作時首先要仔細審題，理解寫作要求，然后根據已給出的要點構思文章．寫作主要考查的是語言組織能力，平時要多積累單詞和好的句型，多閱讀范文，以提高自己的寫作能力．