Question

This morning I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads. After the man in the store packing the bread in a small bag for me, I began to walk home with bag in my hand. On the way I met my next-door neighbor, Miss Wang, that was walking her dog .We greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather. As we were talking, his dog came up at the bag in my hand though the bread gave off a delicious smell. As a result, some of the bread fell to the ground or the dog began to enjoy it. Five minutes late, I was back at the store to buy bread again.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 breads.改成bread

 packing改成packed

 with∧the

 that改成who

 去掉with

 begin改成began

 his改成her

 though改成because/since/as/for

 or改成and

 late改成 later,

【解析】

試題分析：

 bread“面包”是不可數(shù)名詞,不能用breads

 這里用packed做謂語，packing是非謂語

 with∧the，特指“我手里的包”

 that改成who，這是非限制性定語從句，不能用that連接

 去掉with，greet是及物動詞，問候彼此：greet each other

 和greeted并列用began

 指代Miss Wang的狗，用her dog

 因為面包發(fā)出香味，所以她的狗朝我的包走過來：though改成because/since/as/for

 面包掉在地上，狗開始吃，是并列關系：or改成and

 late是形容詞：“遲的”， Five minutes later, 5分鐘后

考點：考查短文改錯

點評：本題考查較為細致，要求考生要特別耐心答題中注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致，時態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應用。一般的這類題型不會出現(xiàn)太復雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考察基礎知識較多。平時應注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結構。修改前先細讀短文，標出出錯的位置，改完以后還得細讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順，