【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Last weekend, I went hike with some friends. Setting off early in the morning, we gathered at the gate of a park in ours city. Then we headed for our destination. We have planned to climb a hill near the park. On the way, we talked, laughed or sang happily. It took us three hour to reach the top. The wonderfully view from the top made all the efforts worthwhile. We had a nice rest and picnic, sharing that we carried in our bags each other. At about four in the afternoon, we began our back trip. It was so a nice experience to get close to the nature and enjoy fresh air that we had a great day.

【答案】1.hike→hiking

2.ours→our

3.have→had

4.or→and

5.hour→hours

6.wonderfully→wonderful

7.that→what

8.each other前加with

9.so→such

10.去掉nature前的the

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章主要講了作者和朋友上周徒步旅行的愉快經(jīng)歷。

1.考查固定搭配。句意:上周,我和一些朋友去徒步旅行。go hiking是固定搭配,意為“徒步旅行”。故將hike改為hiking。

2.考查形容詞性物主代詞。句意:我們很早就出發(fā),在我們城市的一個公園門口集合。根據(jù)名詞city可知,此處應(yīng)用形容詞性物主代詞our修飾。故將ours改為our

3.考查時態(tài)。句意:我們計劃爬公園附近的一座山。根據(jù)短文第一句中“Last weekend”可知,文章是講述上周的事情,plan表示的動作是在這之前就已經(jīng)發(fā)生的,屬于“過去的過去”,應(yīng)使用過去完成時,故將have改為had。

4.考查連詞。句意:在路上,我們交談,哈哈大笑并快樂地唱歌。分子句子可知,“sang”與“talked, laughed”之間是并列關(guān)系,此處應(yīng)使用and連接并列謂語。故將or改為and。

5.考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。句意:我們花費三個小時到達(dá)山頂。hour是可數(shù)名詞,根據(jù)“three”可知此處應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將hour改為hours。

6.考查形容詞。句意:山頂美妙的風(fēng)景讓一切努力都值得。view此處用作名詞,意為“風(fēng)景,景色”,應(yīng)用形容詞修飾,故將wonderfully改為wonderful。

7.考查賓語從句。句意:我們好好休息了一下,還去野餐了,彼此分享我們包里攜帶的東西。分析句子可知,這里是賓語從句,從句中carried缺少賓語,指攜帶的“東西”,應(yīng)用what引導(dǎo),that引導(dǎo)賓語從句時不作任何成分,只起連接作用,故將that改為what。

8.考查介詞。share意為“分享”,常用搭配是share sth. with sb.,意為“和某人分享某物”。故在each other前加with。

9.考查形容詞。這是一次親近大自然和呼吸新鮮空氣的美好經(jīng)歷,所以我們度過了美好的一天。so表示“如此”時用作副詞,such表示“如此”時用作形容詞,句中experience是名詞,應(yīng)使用such修飾,故將so改為such。

10.考查零冠詞。nature意為“大自然,自然界”時其前不加冠詞。故去掉nature前的the。

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