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Patience is of great important in our daily life．Once I waited a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes past，but no bus came．Both upset and annoyed，I decided to walk on feet．But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived．I thought if I had waited for one more minute，I would have caught it．If I chose to take a next bus，I would have to wait for other 30 minutes．Only then do I realize my problem．Being impatient will possibly waste all the effort that we have put it in．Now whenever I am close to lose my patience，I'll think of this experience．

分析 本文描述了作者通過(guò)自己在停車(chē)點(diǎn)等公共汽車(chē)，沒(méi)有耐心而錯(cuò)過(guò)該次班車(chē)的經(jīng)歷，體會(huì)到了有耐心在日常生活中的重要性．現(xiàn)在每次快要失去信心的時(shí)候，他都會(huì)想起這次經(jīng)歷．

解答 Patience is of great importantin our daily life．Once I waited∧a bus to come at a stop.30 minutes past，but no bus came．Both upset and annoyed，I decided to walk on feet．But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived．I thought if I had waited for one more minute，I would have caught it．If I chose to take anext bus，I would have to wait for other 30 minutes．Only thendoI realize my problem．Being impatient will possibly waste all the effort that we have putit in．Now whenever I am close to lose my patience，I'll think of this experience．
試題分析：
1． important 改為importance．考查固定句式．of great+n．=adj．所以用of great importance=important，表示"重要的"．
2．waited 和 a 之間加for．考查介詞．wait不及物動(dòng)詞，wait for sb/sth 等待…所以應(yīng)在waited 和 a 之間加for．
3．past改為passed．考查單詞辨析．past 是介詞，表示"經(jīng)過(guò)，過(guò)去"，而此處缺少謂語(yǔ)故past→passed．
4．feet改成foot．考查固定短語(yǔ)．on foot固定詞組，表示"步行"．
5．when改成than．考查固定句式．no sooner…than…固定用法，表示"一…就…"．
6．a(chǎn) 改成the．考查冠詞．此處next bus應(yīng)是特指下一輛車(chē)，故a→the．
7．other 改成another．考查不定代詞．a(chǎn)nother+數(shù)字+復(fù)數(shù)名詞=數(shù)字+more+復(fù)數(shù)名詞，固定用法"再，又多少多少…"，本句里的數(shù)字在后，所以用another．
8．do 改成did．考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)．本文描述的是過(guò)去的一次經(jīng)歷，應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去事，因此do→did．
9．put后it去掉．考查定語(yǔ)從句．that引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，并在從句中作賓語(yǔ)，因此it多于，去掉．
10．lose改為losing．考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞．本句中be close to 接近…to 是介詞，因此lose→losing．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查短文改錯(cuò)．
to 既是動(dòng)詞不定式，也是介詞，所以在一些短語(yǔ)里to后需要用名詞后動(dòng)名詞，例如本題的be close to 的to 是介詞，后面用doing．其他的還有l(wèi)ead to； contribute to； turn to；pay attention to 等等．平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)注意總結(jié)．

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